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Somewhere in 2012 movellas died. The Ghost of the past, the ghost of good stories that were serious about being authors and authors who wanted a future.

  • Ghost of Movellas
    The story is so unintense as it gets, and I have the fun feeling you don't know what a comma is. See, it's that fun little thing that parts your sentences, so they have more than 5 words each. Every sentence feels the same, as if you don't really say anything, and I can clearly feel the presence of the "author" in every word I read. Also the sentences are unrealistic and the main character is as flat as Bella Swan.
    I Love You, Too.
    I Love You, Too.
    Emily is alone on Valentines day. Harry's busy, of all days. But then, there's a surprise.
    5 years ago
    No, she was being rude. And my character was flat because it was a short story for the competition, if I wrote a book it would be much more interesting. But I don't care about the haters, Thankyou for your support Sylviah21:3
    Look critisism helps writers but can you say it in a nicer way!! Thanks xx
    5 years ago
    Is bella swan really that flat people?
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