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Hi all :3 So I'm Mónica, a 15 year old sophomore. I love to write, but I've never thought I was really any good at it. So many thoughts crash around inside the walls of my brain that it's just overwhelming! Which is why I have several unfinished projects. Maybe here I can finally start a story and finish it too c:

Also, be sure to check out my best bud's profile! She's really talented and I'm sure she'd love to have you read her story. Always_Emily 's the name, now go see what all the fuss is about c:

  • ForeverDeranged:3
    This is... I'm speechless. Purely amazing. The music at the end helped(: And every time you mentioned a song I played it in the background :3 But... I'm a little sad. I TOTALLY thought Zayn was gonna go crazy or something?? I only thought this because of his creepiness and Liam's "You HAVE to like Zayn" thing. Haha, but otherwise, I loved it (: Just like everyone else does... I'm unoriginal :P
    The Naughty Chances
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    Kay Greene; A low profiled teenager attending Holmes Chapel Comprehensive School. Attending Holmes Chapel's Comprehensive school, was not so average as they had one of the most sickening games. The Naughty...
  • ForeverDeranged:3
    Hey, this is pretty good(: I think you should work on your grammar a little more and punctuate more often. Also, try to keep it straight when it comes to who's narrating- first person perspective or third, mainly in your "Who is he?" chapter. Overall I think you should keep writing, practice makes perfect! And be sure not to take any of this too personally, it's just some constructive criticism (:
    You Got Me Love Sick
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    Sara has not seen her best friend Harry Styles for a year now. They both texting and video calling but that didn't mean anything. What happens when two best friends reunite. Will they catch feelings for...
    ohharry
    5 years ago
    Thanks for your opinion. I fixed the chapter "Who Is He" and I will try to add more grammar the next time I update.
  • ForeverDeranged:3
    Just finished chapter six, but i'm not stopping! But are you seriously only ELEVEN?! WHAT.
    By the way, the book's amazing :)
    The Naughty Chances
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    Kay Greene; A low profiled teenager attending Holmes Chapel Comprehensive School. Attending Holmes Chapel's Comprehensive school, was not so average as they had one of the most sickening games. The Naughty...
  • ForeverDeranged:3
    Why haven't you updated.? Don't make me cry :c
    Elements
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    High-school freshman Nerissa Blane has problems. They're not exactly the same as your average teenage girl's either. Nerissa is adopted and on a quest to find her birth mother. But this story isn't quite...
  • ForeverDeranged:3
    Okay, I know I might get some hate for this, but I'm not a big fan of 1D. BUT, I have to admit, this is very well written. Keep up the good work! And maybe just an HP fanfic next time.? c;
    Oh, and by the way, Hermione* :)
    The Harry Swap
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    Harry Potter is the star student at Hogwarts, with his friends Ron and Hermione, he has fought monsters, overcome dangerous traps, and still managed a pretty good average. Harry Styles is a member of a...
    littlemiss111
    5 years ago
    yeah, i think that's part of what we had in mind when we started to write this. it's like a healthy compromise. (:
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