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  • Fluffy
    5 years agoReply
    Great Work - Great Flow - More please !
    Perfection.
    Perfection.
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    This is my entry for the fashion competition. I chose to do the model storyline. I listened to Hallelujah by Rufus Wainwright when writing this. Please comment and click like if you like it!
    Em :)
    5 years ago
    thanks :D
  • Fluffy
    6 years agoReply
    Loving this piece - the opening to a deep story - me thinks ??!
    A true artist can build from this - wrap up your audience and take them with you - dont let go.
    Watch those typo's - words are the purist art form - perfection required !
    My time to fly
    My time to fly
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    David, has spent his life living in the dark, a prisoner inside his own body, forced to battle the demons that battled inside him alone. Can he find a way of escape? Can he finally be granted the happiness...
    Beth...
    6 years ago
    ahh okay thank you! I've edited it now so i hope it all looks good :)
  • Fluffy
    6 years agoReply
    Good stuff ! ... got me hooked in and reading more & more. Keep it up - but - work on the flow girl.
    Like to see some more work from you - i will be watching out.
    Definately a contender - for sure !
    Until death do us part
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    A short story that I've been working on for this competition. I really hope you like it! 'I have been on this earth for only a mere moment, but soon I shall be gone for an eternity. But, even when...
    Beth...
    6 years ago
    if you like it then please hit the like button! x
    Fluffy
    6 years ago
    Liked already - well deserved ! .... Write On !
    Beth...
    6 years ago
    haa thank you! but, if you don't mind me asking, can you be more specific about the flow? x
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