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  • fangirl5955
    2 years agoReply
    Please Update! @[T.W.S Shadownight��] and @[The Writing Girl] pleaaaaassseeee!
    The Girl behind the book
    The Girl behind...
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    "His eyes flicker over the comments, and they grow angrier as he reads more and more. His knuckles go white as he clenches my phone. 'They...t-they do this t-to you?' I nod, silent and he closes his eyes....
  • fangirl5955
    2 years agoReply
    I like this a lot! Very good! My only suggestion is to make some of your paragraphs slightly smaller. Some of them are the perfect size, but there a few that are a bit large. Even if you don't do that it will still be really good. :) Keep writing!
    RED
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    She is sent from her home to be protected. But what will happen when she ends up in the middle of the beast's home. She'll have to chose from her love of one beast, from the love of another beast's love....
    klc_lornzn
    2 years ago
    thank you for the suggestions.
  • fangirl5955
    2 years agoReply
    I so love it!
    The Turning
    The Turning
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    When Holly thinks of angels, she thinks of little cherubs and divine creatures who live in peace and harmony and live happily even after, not that they are normal-looking people who are split into...
  • fangirl5955
    2 years agoReply
    Can not wait for the next update! OMG! SO AMAZING!!!!!!
    The Girl Who Couldn't Go Outside
    The Girl Who Could...
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    Ophelia Sparrow cannot go outside. She cannot feel the sun on her face or the wind in her hair. Ophelia cannot leave the room. And never will. Until one day, she runs. She doesn't know why but she does....
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