FemaleUnited KingdomMember since 19 Jan 15Age 17Last online 2 years ago

Hi so basically I'm 14, like to write, love my friends, family and my doggyy, like sport, badminton and running etc. I'd appreciate any constructive criticism on my stories and lots of likes!!�� I'm kinda new to this so no hating pleasssseeee��❤️

  • Emily25
    2 years agoReply
    This is really good, but maybe change the title to something more creative and original? It's definitely not criticism but you need a title to make it stand out x
    What Happened?
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    When ruby was 10, her parents were murdered, when she told the police and her aunty nobody believed her. Being an only child she was sent to live with her rich aunty in Tokyo. At the age of 18 her aunty...
    Penguinpopz
    2 years ago
    Um thanks what title do you think I should change it to
    Emily25
    2 years ago
    Erm I'm not exactly sure, something like Retrace the Footsteps or Lonely Justice, you would probably be the best to decide as you wrote the book but yeah haha
  • Emily25
    2 years agoReply
    Omgggggg I love this so much I wish I could write as well as this!
    Diavolo {ON HOLD}
    Diavolo {ON HOLD}
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    Just a sample of a story I am writing, eagerly needs CC and motivation to improve.
  • Emily25
    2 years agoReply
    This is really good! The structure is fantastic and I love the description and the way it's set in the present tense! Keep posting :)
    Forladt
    Forladt
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    Novelle om en kvinde, der bor ved vandet.
  • Emily25
    2 years agoReply
    You're going to win this is amazing!!
    Long Lost
    Long Lost
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    *for project remix - inspired by Heroic by Phil Earle* Anna and her little brother Arthur - two people who were always there for each other. But, when she needs him most, where is he? A tale of strength,...
    Emily25
    2 years ago
    Thank you!! And I'm only 14 I'm not that good a writer, you're much better! :)
    nostomanias
    2 years ago
    You're really good for a 14 yr old!
    And I've been writing for ages, it's all just a practice thing. :)
    Emily25
    2 years ago
    Thank you! :)
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