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  • Lunar E. Moon
    Okay some constructive critizm (is I could spell this would be great) She wouldn't say she did and if she did she wouldn't be all out about it make her a little bit more quite about that her not want to talk about. (But it is your story so do what you please with it) other than that it's good the writing structure and the amount a details are just right. I like it. Just be I bit more realist. - Lunar
    Suicide Queen
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    Lunar E. Moon
    2 years ago
    By it I mean that she cuts
    Lunar E. Moon
    2 years ago
    I hope I don't seem all mean just trying to give feed back of what I think can make it better
  • Lunar E. Moon
    I hate you and your really good writing skills I want more I just got to chapter 15 and its really good. I love it 100% no 150% love it completely even tho romance and the marriage has moved a little to fast to me. It's still my favorite story on this.
    Shadow Marked
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    Calista's fear is greater then she can ever imagine. Once she's thrown into this world she knows there's no going back. People, things, there after her coveting the human shadow marked. In a world where...
  • Lunar E. Moon
    Hey not trying to sound rude just giving some advice. But if u use quotations and hit enter when a new person is talking. The story will look nicer and it would be more easy to read. Other than that I really like it so far.
    The babysitter M.G.C
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    Skye's mum Go's out of the country for 5 years and left her 16 year old daughter with a babysitter not just any one a Boy this is going to be living hell for Skye
    Lunar E. Moon
    2 years ago
    Please update
  • Lunar E. Moon
    Aw come on just as it was getting good please update
    Wonderland (Draco Malfoy)
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    I know perfect doesn't exist but darling if it did you would be the definition
    MiniMochi
    2 years ago
    I will be updating soon :)))
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