FemaleUnited KingdomMember since 14 Jun 12Age 18Last online 4 years ago


Hello everyone.
I'm Rebecca, 14 years old from the UK.

If you're true to yourself, you can never go wrong."
-Frank Iero. ♡

~ R. ✩

  • ElectricRevenge
    Hey, you asked me to check this out, so I did :)
    I thought that it was well written, but if you want some constructive criticism, there are a few tiny grammatical mistakes here and there. For example, "beforehand" is all one word, and you forgot to put a question mark at the end of the point about ice-cream :)
    Also, I can relate to loads of these! :P
    I'm gonna check out some of your other stories now! :)
    Agree to Disagree
    Agree to Disagree
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    Is it so bad that I do so many things that other people don't?
    seewhatididthere
    4 years ago
    thanks! i was rushing this one so i should have a few grammatical mistakes here and there. thanks for the criticism, i literally DO appreciate it...negative or positive. :) <3
  • ElectricRevenge
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    Wow, that was really good!
    I couldn't really find much to give constructive criticism on - you write really well :)
    Well done, keep it up :)
    How To Save A Life
    How To Save A Life
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    My entry for The Fault In Our Stars competition.
    tooflytocare
    4 years ago
    Thanks so much :D
    I just don't really know what I am up against, cuz I haven't checked out the other competitor's stories, but I am pretty confident
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