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  • Eeyore
    5 years agoReply
    I like it, it has a number of thought provoking images.
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    Just read XD - for competition. Please like/fave if you can. I'd admire it :)
  • Eeyore
    5 years agoReply
    Some very strong images and emotions coming through, keep it up, I would like to read more.
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    Competition entry for Adam and Jodie's "Ultimate Competition" xD Warning - Got violence and mentions gay relationships. I may also make this into an anthology over the summer.
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    Thank you very much :)
  • Eeyore
    5 years agoReply
    I definitely got a feeling for the train station, the darkness and the rain as well as the isolated loneliness of the people passing through the station, from your writing Rob, very well done!
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    I'm not sure what this is about, but I thought I'd write it anyway! :) Tell me what you think!
  • Eeyore
    5 years agoReply
    I like and agree with the third and fourth paragraph of the Prologue, because that's exactly what governments pharma companies and corporations want from all of us!
    Death is a Flash of Lightning
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    A gothic thriller in fourteen parts, delivered in nightly installments at 10 PM GMT.
  • Eeyore
    5 years agoReply
    nice ending to Apocalyptic Birthday; 4th paragraph from the bottom should probably be "My dear brothers and sisters, lords and ladies, and my sons. I would like to start with an apology, I am sorry that I have not made an appearance like this before, in fact I have not made a public appearance in (not is) nearly five hundred years.
    Requiem: Life on Verigo
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    Requiem is an epic trilogy, written in an autobiographical style, we get to see the world from the eyes of a street urchin called Rilley Faliin; better known as Daw'ka. In 'Life on Verigo' we learn...
    D.B. Fairless
    5 years ago
    Nicely spotted, I'm sure that I'll spend the next few months fixing all the small mistakes
    Eeyore
    5 years ago
    mistakes are natural, I make them too, it is very difficult to catch them all yourself, the main thing is that you are coming up with an interesting and well put together plot, keep working at it!
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