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  • love.laugh.die
    I have only just started this story but I find it intriguing! I think that there are some small errors that would be fixed such as some sentences are quite short, and not very descriptive. I feel as if they could be a little longer. I mean there should be a little bit of a difference between long and short sentences to make it flow, but in the first section there are quite a bit and I feel it could be better.

    I really like the character Morrow so far!

    Also one little tweak is that at the end of the chapters it usually ends with a . . . I personally am not a huge fan of it, but I don't think it makes a huge difference, just a little thing that I get annoyed at. Anyway I love this story so far and you are an excellent writer, I will definitely continue to read this! :)

    Rate 10/10 :)

    Please continue writing! Hahah sorry this review isn't the best but I really do enjoy this book!
    Hoist The Colours **Unedited Spelling Mistakes**
    Hoist The Colours...
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    I only have a limited amount of time to tell you this dear readers. I am Morrow. I am sixteen. And I'm a pirate. (Awesome cover by Lady Tatertot! Go check out her cover shop, guys! That is, after you're...
    love.laugh.die
    2 years ago
    It's fine and your welcome!
  • love.laugh.die
    Title: The Camera
    Author: me! (Aurelie on the cover) but love.laugh.die on movellas haha
    Rated: Yellow

    It's a new story just need some feedback and let me know what story you want me to review!
    Movellas Reviews!
    Movellas Reviews!
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    More info in the first chapter!
  • love.laugh.die
    JUST FOUND THIS AND IM ON CHAPTER FOUR AND ITS AMAZING I LOVE IT OMG YOU ARE AN INCREBILE WRITER! Like usually these are all really like badly written but this is so well written, so intresting. You are such an amazing writer and I can't wait to continue! Ahhh I love it haha
    She Taught Me How To Love
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    "If anyone asked me what impact Leigh had on my life, I could easily tell them. She taught me how to love." After four long years of a highly successful career, news of his childhood sweetheart sends...
    love.laugh.die
    2 years ago
    And omg all of ur covers are amazzinngggg
    Oh Hipsta Please
    2 years ago
    Thank you so much that means a lot :)
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