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A writer, singer, fangirl, and lover of all things fantasy

Hello, and thanks for looking at my stories! I love comments, and the more people tell me to update, the sooner I'll update. I love people telling me what they think, even if it's constructive criticism. Hey, if you want to help make my work better, be my guest. I don't like hate comments, but there's nothing I can do about them so if you hate my stories I'm sorry.

Accomplishments:

**Winner of Red Queen competition with Steel Queen**
**Winner of Replica competition with Ascendence**

Gems of Movellas 2- When The World Falls To Darkness

Second entry for the blogging competition


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  • Dragon rider fangirl
    1 Like
    Okay, so I'm here from the feedback chain.

    This story has a really intriguing plot. It got a little confusing at times, though. The start bit, with Ember's perspective, and later on, got a little confusing. But the plot twist was amazing! I never would have guessed Ember's true identity, and I guess that's why you revealed it that way, but wow. This story is incredibly well written. The characters swear a lot- maybe a little excessively- but that's just my personal opinion. Other than that, I really liked this story. I know I'm supposed to think that Ember is a raging psychopath, but I can't help but like her and feel bad for her. I mean, she has ultimate powers. That would be enough to make anybody snap. I also like the people-have-powers-but-no-destiny kind of thing. I like that- it makes the whole concept feel more real. All in all, great idea, keep up!
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    What do you do when you find out that you can do things other people can't do? Simple- you wait. Eventually, someone will show up on your doorstep, tell you that you're the Chosen One, and send you off...
    IAmYourNemesis
    2 weeks ago
    Thank you so much! :) <3
  • Dragon rider fangirl
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    Okay, I'm here from the feedback chain. Sorry this took me a while. I love this story though! I've always liked the twists on the stories, and this one is really surprising. I didn't fully get the whole girl-being-the-rose thing though. You said the spell rebounded and hit her- and then the lady cast it again. So were there two roses? Or was the other rose unimportant, or what? It was a little vague. Also her sudden change of plans, deciding not to kill him, that also was confusing. But other than that, this is super well written and amazing, and I love it! Good job.
    The Rose
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    Belle, trained assassin extraordinaire, has a new mission. Find the Beast, a huge, fierce myth that could probably tear Belle's throat out in two seconds, take all of his secrets, and kill him. Not him-...
    GoToTheGalaxy
    2 weeks ago
    Thank you for the feedback! Much appreciated <3
  • Dragon rider fangirl
    Okay, why not, this sounds fun. :)

    Name: Kailetra Mixaxi.
    Age: She's 82, which is teenager for her kind
    Appearance: She's five inches tall, with long black hair, yellow cat pupiled eyes, dark brown skin, deer antlers, and a long tail.
    Magical abilities: She can move incredibly fast
    Talents/skills/hobbies: She’s a skilled weaver, and can also play the flute really well
    Usual attire: She wears dresses, the color of fall leaves.
    Living conditions: She usually can find places to sleep by playing her flute, but she can sleep pretty much anywhere, since she’s small
    Relations: She loves to taunt Adrian, because she can run away before Adrian can hurt her
    Others: She’s a kelpie, which is the child of a goblin and a fairy (if that’s possible) so it makes people suspicious of her, but she’s incredibly friendly and cheerful so she can usually stop being from being suspicious

    Name: Adrian Flame
    Age: She’s eighteen
    Appearance: She has reddish skin, glowing orange eyes, and fire for hair (she’s part fire elemental) She’s also tall and always glows faintly
    Magical abilities: She has fire powers
    Talents/skills/hobbies: Nothing major, except she’s immune to heat (But on the flip side, she’s vulnerable to cold, and it makes her shut down)
    Usual attire: She wears black outfits that are fireproof, to dim her glow
    Living conditions: Orphaned and lives out on the streets, but most people fear her so she doesn’t have many problems
    Relations: She hates Kailetra, who likes to sneak up on her and taunt her, or play tricks on her
    Others: She’s extremely hot tempered, and will snap if somebody even looks at her funny. She hates being called Adrian, so everybody that knows her either called her A or Flame. Except Kailetra, who calls her Adrian just to annoy her.

    Good luck with your story, and I can't wait to see other chapters!
    Avlaria- add your characters
    Avlaria- add your...
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    Okay so I just read "Movellas Academy" by Anne Onymous, and I really liked how the author made the story interactive by letting other Movellas users add their own characters. Btw, you should read Movellas...
    KananiNeko
    3 weeks ago
    Thanks for the characters!
    Dragon rider fangirl
    No problem! :)
  • Dragon rider fangirl
    Ascension**Winner of Replica writing Comp** In the city of Eto, the life of a noble is worth the live of ten commoners. In order to keep the world balanced, each...


    Kind of a fantasy/adventure story...
    I would prefer not to read a fanfiction, or a horror story.
    This sounds like fun! :)
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