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  • DownFall

    Feedback for feedback

    3 years agoReply
    If you have the time could you check out my story-in-progress "Rachel Cage"? Any feedback would be much appreciated and I will return the favor in advance. Many thanks, Takuya.
    elizabeth414
    3 years ago
    enable to get some feedback and helpful advice just click the link to my story below. read and review all i will do the same to urs ASAP.
    Her Choice*New Cover* After their adventure in the games are finished, Katniss Everdeen flees from everything she has ever encountered. She is accompanied by her...
  • DownFall
    4 years agoReply
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    These poems you have written are something that I think much more people should see. I can see that the chapters are dates so it must be the development of you trying to give up someone you cannot have. The way that your poems are developed over each chapter shows how real this is and I personally thank you for publishing a movella like this because this is what alot of people go through but they hide all their journeys inside a diary hidden somewhere in their room. Im liking, favoriting, and fanning this. Thank you for publishing this movella, and I am happy you shared this with people like me on movellas. Even though this is might be over, I am happy that this is over and I thank you again for sharing this and not taking that experience as a thorn in your side, but a wall that you built a bridge over :)
    Poems of a Bygone Time
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    These were written during a time in my life when I was quite smitten with a certain young woman. They were written in a dark basement, usually late at night, when I felt most lonely and desired that loneliness...
  • DownFall
    4 years agoReply
    Once again your going nuts writing stories hahaha. Good job its really good (y) :D
    Hunted: Beth
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    Elizabeth Folks was 3 when she was found wondering out of Black Forest. Since then she has become the towns 'living legend'. Adopted by strangers to protect their only child, she became the 'bait' if anything...
    itsClearSkies
    4 years ago
    ... Yeah. LOL ^-^
  • DownFall
    4 years agoReply
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    This is so good, the prologue has already got me eager to read all of this. Keep up the good work :)
    In Sheep's Clothes
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    What better way to destroy an invading enemy, than to destroy it from within? [New installment every week!] Rated 15+: Contains use of strong language, Violence/Gore and references to Adult themes.
    Midnight Rogue
    4 years ago
    Thanks :3 I'm glad you're enjoying it
  • DownFall
    4 years agoReply
    Nice entry Dylan, and its a poem :) You've done a really good job here, all the best with the competition
    Clipped Wings
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    Whether you go to heaven or hell depends on the person you are and which god you followed people believed. Along the lines of finding a better place other then the world where do we all go? This is for...
    DylannWill
    4 years ago
    Im so happy you liked it! I wasn't too sure if it was good or not since im not that familiar with poetry but its good to hear from you that its good :D
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