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  • dormouse
    4 years agoReply
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    This is a really good story. The plot is really exciting. By the way don't stop updating it because when you update it it shows up on the feeds and goes to the top of the list of movellas of the genre. That's how I noticed it and read it. So updating it might get you more views!
    My Story
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    'My name is Tilly, I'm seventeen years old, the place I now live in was once a buzz of energy, I was once a farm horse, I once lived with an old man who spoiled me rotten, I was once meant to become a...
    bookworm121
    4 years ago
    Thanx so much!

    And don't worry I'll keep updating!
  • dormouse
    5 years agoReply
    This is really good although Merry and Ebony sound very similar. Wouldn't they write in different styles? But its a very good style and written really well so I'm not criticising just making a suggestion! :)
    Child of the Seas
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    Ebony and Merry live two very different lives in separate worlds. Neither has ever considered the possibility of the other's existence. But now the bridges between the worlds are weakening. An ancient...
  • dormouse
    5 years agoReply
    this is an exciting beginning. i want to read more
    Control
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    Controllers population are increasing all over the world in 2078, because the deadly virus, Hydra, has been exposed, and it is making the earth rip apart. Controllers have the ability to move things with...
  • dormouse
    5 years agoReply
    This is really really good but soooo sad. I love how you have sshown both sides of the bullying. Its really good.
    I Like How I Am
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    This is currently being edited.
    Nina :)
    5 years ago
    Thanks, it was sad to write it! :) xx
  • dormouse
    5 years agoReply
    I like the opening. The way you use a list is really cool!
    Don't change
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    I was tired of being the geek, the loner, the fat one. I wanted more than one friend. I wanted to be popular, pretty, sexy. So I got a makeover..
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