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I'm a deep, mysterious person. Most people don't get me, and that is okay with me. I have such passions and dreams, but only one life to live. My poems and my writings are an expression of the deep parts of me. Whether it be about love, God, or anything else, poetry is the language of my heart.

  • I Think In Ink
    This is excellent :). Definitely a very emotion-inspiring work. Keep it up!
    Falling Child (911 Tribute)
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    911 was one of the worlds most horrific events. I sure many people remember watching it on their televisions. Everyone knows where they were that day. Do you remember seeing the small black dots falling...
  • I Think In Ink
    Wow, this is fantastic. I'm afraid I don't know who Vesp is/was, but this piece is outstanding.
    Sonnet: For Vesp - A Movellas Memory
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    When Vesp first got cast out of Movellas
    Midnight Rogue
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    Thank you. Vesp was a movellian that got suspended on the grounds of very flimsy excuses. But, eh, what can you do?
  • I Think In Ink
    This is good work, I would just recommend two things... First, I would say something different after "when your arms aren't around me", since you've already established that he's not there. Secondly, I think you may have a typo shortly after that "it up all up..." Other than that, nice work and good luck!
    Rosy Starling Bird (My entry for the Poetry Competition, PLEASE READ)
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