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  • DKeebs
    5 years agoReply
    Based on the picture from the top of the page, i think it incorparated those elements nicely. It was short, but i'm also assuming you weren't writing a paper or anything. Maybe an adaptation into poetry would work, it would feel more proper. Little character development is annoying, but that may just be my novel mindset coming into play. Its also short, something that bothers me, the story just feels like it needs a little more to it. Overall, i would say this is a good piece, and deserves some recognition. Well done Olivia, i commend you.
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    This is my first piece I have published on movellas! It is about the repeating nature of our past. Let me no what you think :) I also entered it into the Picture Prompt competition and check it out! Tell...
    Livvy
    5 years ago
    thank you very much, i appreciate the honest response
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