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  • DizzyRose.
    4 years agoReply
    Ha ha ha!!! That's really good Jen-Jen!!! It shows very clearly that you get everything that I was saying and in such a great way!!! And as you'll know for certain, I'm not laughing at your poem. I'm just displaying how happy I am with your display of understanding. It's really great. xxx
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    This is a poem about how everyone's work is special in it's own way, I hope you like x Copyright (c)
    xxJenJenxx
    4 years ago
    Aw thanks, I'm glad you like it :)
  • DizzyRose.
    4 years agoReply
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    Then again, yeah feel pressured into saying yes! I really wanna keep this piece of art. Cos that's what it is. Verbal art. I want it so I can read it whenever I want to and in many years to come when we're all old and grey, I wanna be able to read this over and over. Please say I can have it. (Write it up.... Not pinch it!) :0)
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    xxJenJenxx
    4 years ago
    Yeah, I am lucky to have you helping me, no joke :) Thanks, I am wonderful aren't I, joking! Thanks for reading some more x The comment above this one was phrased a bit wrong as my computer hadn't showed me your latest comment! Typical technology :)
    xxJenJenxx
    4 years ago
    Sorry, I put I am instead of you are, I don't know why :) I completely mistyped what I intended to, I think the snow's getting to my head...
    xxJenJenxx
    4 years ago
    Wow! I just realised how long this conversation was x
  • DizzyRose.
    4 years agoReply
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    Would you mind if I copy it out, Jen-Jen? I've got a journal; several actually!; and whenever I come across poetry that actually moves me; touches the soul, ya know; I copy it down into my journal. Of course it'll have your name to it. I'm not saying I'm gonna 'steal' it. Some people don't like their work taken away from where its displayed etc but I really hope you'll say Yes! It's your work though hunny so I won't write it down in my journals if you don't want me to or ain't comfortable with me doing it. (I know I could've just done it and you'd never know, but I would not be able to do that because I'd know. I am always upfront and honest. Can't see the point of bullshit and that. ) please don't feel pressured into saying I can if you might be unhappy later on. It's just such an amazing piece of work. X
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    DizzyRose.
    4 years ago
    Yeah for sure! I am not gonna change it or do anyfing at all to what you've done. All I do is write it down in my journal and then draw little pics and stuff around it. Flowers, hearts, just to make the page colourful. That's all hunny. I swear Jen-Jen. I can send u a pic once I've done it if there's a way of doing that. I'll be adding ya name to it and the date, that sort of stuff but I only do that so I can remember who wrote it, when they did and that sort of thing. It's so good and it hits ya right where it should and so I'd like to have a 'copy' of it, for no other reason than so I can go back and read it in years to come and won't have forgotten when where and who it came from. So thank u babe for letting me do that. XX
    xxJenJenxx
    4 years ago
    Your welcome! It's a really nice idea :)
    xxJenJenxx
    4 years ago
    I'm really sorry, I've been thinking about the journal thing and I'm not sure whether I'm comfortable with it anymore
  • DizzyRose.
    4 years agoReply
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    Oh my f**king god!!! Jen-Jen this is amazing!! Way to go girl!! You've really hit it hunny. It's awesome. It flows so well and the sentiment is beautiful!! It truly is. One of the hardest things to do....and much, much harder than writing a poem...is rewriting the same poem in a different tempo or rhythm etc. Because you wrote the original, its so hard-wired in your brain, that trying to change it is so hard to do. But by Christ Jen-Jen...YOU HAVE DONE AN EPIC JOB!! I am grinning so much. You clever, clever girl. Well done! I really can't express how awesome you are to have done this! Every one should read this. It's BEAUTIFUL. X
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    xxJenJenxx
    4 years ago
    Aw, thank you so much! I'm really glad you like it, I'm grinning loads now too :)
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