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I'm a piece of cheese in a game of cat and mouse...
I'm a tile on the roof of the shadow of your house...
I'm a ripple in the ether
I'm the twinkle of a wish
I'm a spell of rising bubbles
I am...
DeepRiverFish

There are no shadows without light...STAY STRONG


  • DeepRiverFish
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    "Oh Sapphire skies..." - Very Shakesperian. Love it.
    Told you there was happier roads ahead !!! Keep travelling "Oh Monkey Sparrow"
    Sapphire Skies
    Sapphire Skies
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    A poem about how even in the saddest moments, we can turn that frown upside down. Please can I have opinions as this is my first attempt at a happy poem! Thanks <3
    DeepRiverFish
    3 years ago
    Hope so, like I said ages ago..."Bad feelings make for bad writing"
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    Thanks !!
    It's a REAL place, as the poem says. Somewhere where I go on family holidays every year.
    If I can't sleep, I just think of it.
    Sounds silly, but it works for me.
    There is a place...
    There is a place.....
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    A proven remedy for spinning heads...
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    Some beautiful images and metaphors...nature can be so inspirational.
    Leaves with secrets....rivers applauding.......I think they call that PERSONIFICATION if my memory serves me right. GOOD SOLID POETRY.
    I find it difficult to write about nature - just because it's not easy to do it justice, but I never stop trying cos it's a writing challenge.
    Keep your chin up and set your sights on creating a collection of natural world poems. That'd be great stuff to read.
    DO YOU DO POETRY REQUESTS ??
    If so I would like to read one that you've written about....
    DRAGONFLIES !!!
    Don't rush though. Take a few weeks to let the ideas flow...
    Let me know if you think you can do it !!!
    The Natural World
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    A poem about the natural world and why it's so beautiful.
  • DeepRiverFish
    Not sure it needs one. It says it all really..."I am ME, and that suits ME fine."
    Enjoy being who YOU are.
    You wouldn't judge other people harshly...so why judge YOURSELF harshly?
    If you judge YOURSELF harshly, you're just joining in with all the other IDIOTS who dish out their insults and judgements about things that don't really matter.
    What REALLY counts, is that you ENJOY being YOU.
    (WE ARE ALL UNIQUE. GOD MADE US THIS WAY)
    Don't BULLY YOURSELF....get it ??
    Write a great BIG list of everything you ENJOY in life............EVERYTHING.
    DO IT NOW !!!!!
    (DO NOT WRITE A SEPERATE LIST OF NEGATIVE STUFF !!!!! That's the stuff the IDIOTS would write !!!!)
    I am not a supermodel...
    I am not a supermo...
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    I think I just pooed...
    Is it safe to come out of the fridge now?
    Hello........anybody there? ....
    Am I the only one left?
    Spooks and Shadows
    Spooks and Shadows
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    Alone, I am left to fight them. The creatures of darkness. The creatures that make fear itself look meek. Left to rot in the cold stone room of Traitor Tower, I await my inevitable face. Beware, for you...
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