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  • Dawn Skies
    4 years agoReply
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    Sam, this is crazily good! Amazing! They way you have blended two periods of time is fantastic and there is more than one mystery running through the whole story. Not surprised you have had so many comments already because it really does hook you and constantly makes you answer questions. Can't wait to read on... don't get distracted like I do!!
    Murder at Huntington Manor
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    Huntington Manor is a place of murder and betrayal. Willow Taylor is writing an article in History about Huntington Manor.She is told to visit it but there is a myth that whoever goes in there dies,...
    Sam xxx
    4 years ago
    Aww thanks for the comments! I will try not to. Other the summer you can finish that story off haha :D
  • Dawn Skies
    5 years agoReply
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    Wow Sam. This is really intriguing! Can you see how far your writing has come in such a short space of time? I'm so impressed and so proud of you! x
    Eternity
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    Talulah has had a up and down life. Now her parents have moved her to a new country away from her best friend Lucy. How can she cope?! But these dreams of him keep on coming to Talulah. Gram, the voodoo...
    Sam xxx
    5 years ago
    Ah thank you! I feel like my writing is improving I need to start learning a wider range of words I think.
    Thank you! x
  • Dawn Skies
    5 years agoReply
    I like the speaker in this story. You should definitely develop this more.
    Why does it have to be me
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    I don't think I can take it anymore. The bullying I'm talking about. It's too much, I get it from everyone. No one likes me. Why do I bother living.
  • Dawn Skies
    5 years agoReply
    I really like the conversational tone and you get a clear idea of the characters' personalities. Perhaps more description and imagery entwined with the speech would support your writing. I really like it so far :)
    At One With The Supernatural
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    Grace Winchester has never really had a stable place to stay. Always moving around, always on the run. Why? Her family were hunters. They didn't hunt deer or geese like normal people. Her family has always...
    fangirl555
    5 years ago
    I'm glad you like the story so far! I'll get to describing the town a bit more in the next couple chapters. (Yeah, I should've done that at first) It won't be until Friday at the earliest, though. Such a busy week! But, I do have Winter Break after this, so then I have much more time to update :)
  • Dawn Skies
    5 years agoReply
    Started chapter 2...!
    In my Dreams
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    After returning from university, Kate began to think that her future wasn't going to be as exciting as she once dreamed. Not even a job at a London based PR company seemed to be offering much hope. However...
    Sam xxx
    5 years ago
    Yey! Thank you so much for buying me that book. I can't wait to read it, I read some this morning in form xx
    Dawn Skies
    5 years ago
    Hope you're enjoying them... can't wait for the final book next year! I will get us copies as soon as it is out!!
    Sam xxx
    5 years ago
    Aw thank you, its very nice of you!
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