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  • David914
    5 years agoReply
    Strength in WeaknessA young girl has to accept her grandmothers suicide and in doing so, it makes her stronger. This is my entry for 'The Big Poetry Competition', so pleas...


    i nominate Nicolle Millian's 'Strength in Weakness' .. beautifull poem which holds a lot of meaning for it's author. x
    Nicolle
    5 years ago
    Thank you :) x
  • David914
    6 years agoReply
    i like your close attention to detail in all the poems, really brings out the mood
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    A girl feeling vulnerable by admitting her love
    Nicolle
    6 years ago
    Thank you :D I try hard to describe things to make the reader connect with the poem
  • David914
    6 years agoReply
    :) reminds me of waking up and listening to red hot chilli peppers with the sunlight pouring in, i love you.
    Wake Up In Love
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    Waking up to the one you love and feeling blissfully content
    Nicolle
    6 years ago
    That's what it was about, waking up on a sunny morning with you and feeling so happy :) I love you
  • David914
    6 years agoReply
    very visual, can almost imagine the metaphors in the poem actually happening
    Beginners Love
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    A poem of a girl struggling with love as her darkening mind struggles to see the light.
    Nicolle
    6 years ago
    I'm glad you connected with it, was a very emotional poem. Thank you for your comment xx
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