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  • DaisyHeart
    4 years agoReply
    This is really good although I am a little confused as to when it is set because Cedric wasn't famous until after he died, if it is set before he died then Bellatrix wouldn't be not coming to platform because of her safety, she would be not coming because she was in Azkaban and doesn't get out until o.o.p. Also, incase you didn't know the Lestranges and the Malfoys are pretty closely related so you might not want to get into romance there. Sorry I didn't mean to sound too critical I'm just a little confused.
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    Lena Lestrange is Bellatrixs' daughter, and she is new to Hogwarts. Will her time here go well or not? Will she find true love? Or will she become a powerful witch? Its a Lestrange life
  • DaisyHeart
    4 years agoReply
    This is great. I've never heard of the TV show but this seems good so far. You're developing the characters well and it's easy to understand.
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    "Alphas- they are among us. So open your eyes, and open your mind..." A group of humans with supernatural abilities is formed. Each with their own power they hide, working with the govenment. But more...
  • DaisyHeart
    4 years agoReply
    This is really good. You have real talent. It's one of those things that most people can't write about very well because they get it all wrong and don't understand the emotions but you seem to have done it really well.
    Shattered reflections (book 1 in the shattered series)
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    Alice is a 14 year old mess. She gets bullied, her parents have broken up and shes anorexic. Will anything be able to turn her life around? She is a broken girl in a cruel world. What did she ever do...
  • DaisyHeart
    4 years agoReply
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    You know this has got a similar sort of idea to another movella I've read but you don't seem the kind of person to copy like that so I guess it's nothing.
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    Lilly Green is pretty much a normal girl, does normal things like normal stuff, but gets tortured by her family and bullied at school. Harry Styles is a lovely but kind off guy he is in the biggest...
  • DaisyHeart
    4 years agoReply
    Hey I know I said I'd read and comment on all three of your movellas but as I'm going to watch this film next week when I have a sleepover I've only read the first couple of chapters. Like i said on your other story it's really good besides from one or two spelling mistakes but they don't really matter anyway. :-)
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    *I have copied this off a film* Raised in the African bush country by her zoologist parents ,Cady thinks she knows all about the 'survival of the fittest' But the law of the jungle takes on a whole...
    Summer-louise Horan
    what spelling mistakes and thanks
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