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  • daisyconnorhey
    THE BOY WHO CRI...
    Once upon a time there was a little boy called Toby, Toby was a seven year old look out he had too look out for the Sucker Slaughterers because they can suck your face off in a matter of minutes all that's left is a head and two giant shocked holes where there mouth and eyes used to be! Toby was looking after a small town called Lynton which only had elders and that one 7 year old boy because the other young people got there face sucked off because they were the previous look outs and every time one get's slaughtered another young one get's the job! Soo Toby eventually got slaughtered at 24 but his 4 year old son had to be the new look out Toby's wife Mary didn't approve of her 4 year old son getting madly slaughtered but the goverment killed her soo the 4 year old was now a six year old and sneezed a little sneeze but that second a blizzard came and his last words got frozen and said the chi... Soo the town was confused the boy's face was still on but an old women called grace looked behind everyone was dead and next it was her turns out that a little china doll that Mary's mum gave her had been transformed into Mary, Mary had a curse though everything around her she would use and it would actually be a sharp knife soo she was going to tell
    her little boy that it was all going to be al right and wrap him in a little blue scarf with red spots well the scarf was a knife and the spots were blood from her aunt that got mysteriously killed but Mary couldn't believe it and now haunts anywhere that she can to get revenge people are going every millisecond soon it will be YOU...
    Jordan Philips
    5 years ago
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  • daisyconnorhey
    The Abandoned Asylum
    Once apon a time there was an asylum this perticular asylum was haunted and 700 years old!
    but on october the 31st all the fears of those within will be unleashed it all starts here at the beggining of the end where in one perticular dusty street one tall dark figure stood in front of one gigantic building this building was tall and frightining with a black bricked and crooked chimney. This abbandoned street is now soo incredibly famous but I must tell you why... One darkened morning a mysterius mist came drifting around the building this made the creepy building stand out soo a nice young couple came around the corner the women backed away slightly but the man walked through
    the mist and saw the figure that stood there all day all month and all year some would say he'd been there for hundrouds of years some say thousends but as I was saying this man walked up to the dark figure and studdered "where can I find the owner for this umm building"? The dark figure looked as though he just saw a ghost and mimed that he or she could not speak the women got a bit more brave and curiosly staggered through the mist like she'd just been shot and said "pppplease remove your hood" So the figure did and the couple fainted and woke up inside the building and jumped up and held each other in they're arms and whispered stuff like "don't worry" and "were just dreaming" but the man immediatly thought about what would happen if it's not a dream and decided to take action and crawled through the thick mist surrounding him it seams that the figure did not want them dead his wife was now rocking in a corner whimpering like a puppy about to be put down! 2000 years went by and a group of meddling kids decided to check it out they called there mums, The police and basicly the whole town eventuly they came too a room covered in writing the writing was in blood and help us was the messege there was a fleshy monster covered in blood was still writing but too this day if you go to the misty street into the misty building you will still see the figure standing outside and inside the women still crying in the corner but the building was also filled with clothes and camra's where are the people will be your last word before your face get's sucked off and your body get's thrown into a chipper but too this day people are still getting slaughtered in a way soo terrible and horrific that the news papers arn't allowed to publish a thing about that peticular street that perticular building and the misty figure stiill standing outside!

    By Daisy Connor 12
    daisyconnorhey
    5 years ago
    Does anyone like my story? I'm only 12 which means I'm not a very good writer! LOL
    amirzada
    5 years ago
    One day a boy named Charlie Wackaweed, was making a wish on a star. He did not know that the wish he would be making would change his life forever.

    It was late one night, when Charlie was looking at the stars. He had heard that if you wish on the first star you see, your wish will become true. So he spotted the first star that he saw, and he made a wish on it. His wish was that whatever he said or did, for it to come true. So for instance if he would say "Let it snow" it would snow.

    Just a few days later, he was sitting in Geometry class wondering about the test they would have in about 5 minutes. When he got the test, he sat there wishing that he would ace the test. He took the test that was supposed to be very hard and he thought that it was easy. He got it back and it was an A+. he was amazed because he had never had a test and aced it before, and this test was probably the hardest one that he had ever taken. He asked all his classmates what they had gotten on the test and they all replied " A C+ or lower. Charlie was very excited that he had gotten a better grade than Chris, who was an A+ student ,and Chris had made a C-.

    There was this one kid that Charlie did not like. He wished that something bad would happen to him. The very next day he was out of school. Charlie asked his teacher where he was he said " He is in the hospital with a very deadly disease. It came on him so fast, and none of the doctors have a cure. It is really weird. I have never seen anything like it."

    The very next day, Charlie heard that the kid with the deadly disease had died. Charlie was upset about the whole situation. He knew that it was his fault that he had died . So he went to his funeral with sorrow and regret.

    He was at home, alone, late one night. All of a sudden the phone rang. He ran down the steps to answer it thinking that it might be his parents. He picked up the phone and he heard the dial tone. He thought to himself "That's weird" and then he went back up to his room thinking no more about it. This happened several more times and he still ignored it. Then all of a sudden the door bell rang. He went down to answer it again thinking that it might be his best friend Jarred. He opened the door and said "Hey Jarred......what's....." but then he noticed that no one was there. He thought to himself "It must be those little kids that live down the street prank calling and ringing the doorbell and running." So he then went back up the stairs to his room, thinking no more of it. Then there was a peck on the window. He was really starting to get kind of scared and curious. He went to the window, opened it and yelled "Get out of here you little kids!!" But still he saw no one. Since it was starting to get really freaky, he decided to go and watch some T.V. He flipped on the T.V. and right then the power went out. He knew that the kids couldn't have done something like that because he didn't have a fuse box. He now realized that the kids couldn't have done any of the other things now, and he was starting to get really scared. He went and got a flash light and he saw red eyes across the room and was coming very fast towards him. He all of a sudden heard a low, creepy, but familiar voice calling " Charlie..........Charlie...........Charlie.....how could you do something like this to me?" Charlie replied "Who are you? What do you want from me? I have no clue what you're talking about." The voice replied "You do know what I'm talking about Charlie Wackaweed."All of a sudden, it jumped out behind the shadows and Charlie saw a beaten, flesh removed, kid that Charlie recognized as the kid that he had wished that something bad would happen to. His eyes were blood red, and the flesh that he had left was purple and blue. Charlie was scared to death. He told the kid that he had never meant for him to be killed or even hurt, but he didn't believe him. The kid replied "Now it is your turn to follow the pain and death that I had suffered through."
    Jordan Philips
    5 years ago
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