MaleUnited KingdomMember since 17 Jan 12Age 48Last online 4 years ago

Half mad, half Welsh, half chance poet and writer.

  • Dai Mac
    6 years agoReply
    Intriguing – I would however like more description of the surroundings, as if I a dream like or intoxicated state. A critique would be that maybe you are delving a little too much into your own mind at this early stage – let the reader use their imagination to realise or predict how you would be feeling in this situation and enjoy the experience as it unfolds. Let it flow!
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    A girl wakes up on a deserted island. She has no memory of what went before. Who is she? What is she doing there? As she starts exploring, it becomes clear that she is taking part in a terrible experiment....
  • Dai Mac
    6 years agoReply
    Hi Cat. Good Composition - have you been writing long? I published my first but have loads of stuff - check it out, see what you think. Dai
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