FemaleUnited KingdomMember since 19 Mar 13Age 19Last online 3 years ago

Hey everyone, I am an avarage sorta girl who's a bit of a geek. I live in Scotland, and I love Harry Potter, X-Men, Doctor Who, Hunger Games, Winter's Saga, Darcie Lock, and Percy Jackson! :)

  • CuriousFox
    4 years agoReply
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    Awesome! You have so much description here, and the plot is simple but interesting, and grabs you from the first line. Looking forward to reading the full one :)
    The Deathwalker Chronicles
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    This is for the City of Bones contest. A Deathwalker is a human who helps the dead to pass over to the other side when they unfinished business left here on earth.
  • CuriousFox
    4 years agoReply
    This is a brilliant story! I love your plot twists, and the characterisation. You are great at writing, and I wish you luck! :)
    The Child Snatcher
    The Child Snatcher
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    -For the 24 hour City of bones contest-- London is not the town we all know and love any more. It's a town haunted by witches, goblins and all sorts of creatures that are all out to get the humans...
    ToryB
    4 years ago
    Thanks! :-) I'm glad you like it! I thought it might be a bit of an odd storyline to take but hey ho. Did you enter? If so do you want me to check yours out? :-)
    CuriousFox
    4 years ago
    Yep, I gave it a shot! If you would like to take a look then I would be more than happy :)
    Becoming a WolfMade for the Mortal Instruments Challenge! Coinín is a young wolf, who hates what she stands for. Her friends have no trouble accepting it, but being the...

  • CuriousFox
    4 years agoReply
    You have really good dialogue! And you described the characters pretty well, especially with the word limit. The twist was brilliant, and I feel rather sorry for David - shunned by everyone, and now going to have his soul ripped out. Still, really good story!
    The soul hunter
    The soul hunter
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    In the city of London, David Redford is a bounty hunter for people trying to skip their payments. The payment being their soul.
    A Writer1
    4 years ago
    Thank you for the great comment and I agree I started to feel sorry for David
  • CuriousFox
    4 years agoReply
    Wow! I loved the idea, and the way it flows so nicely. The way the Monster was a completely different character to Ashlynn, and then they kinda combined at the end was brilliant, and summed up the story really nicely :)
    Killing In Dreams
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    Ashlynn Semard wakes up every morning with blood on her hands. Literally. Every time she sleeps, she kills in her dreams. She tries to stay awake but her emerald eyes begin to droop. The pounding of a...
    LeMezMeister
    4 years ago
    Thanks so much! Have you entered the competition as well?
    CuriousFox
    4 years ago
    Yep, 'becoming a wolf'
    Becoming a WolfMade for the Mortal Instruments Challenge! Coinín is a young wolf, who hates what she stands for. Her friends have no trouble accepting it, but being the...
    LeMezMeister
    4 years ago
    I'll check it out now
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