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Just a young writer trying to get feedback on her writings!

  • Crosbie
    4 years agoReply
    I love love love how descriptive you are and your ability or conjure up moods is terrific!
    The Coming Storm
    The Coming Storm
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    Eons ago, everyone lived in harmony. But God and Lucifer became opposites, Lucifer fled to the fiery pits and the war of heaven began. Any angel who sided with god stayed in eternal bliss, any angel who...
  • Crosbie
    4 years agoReply
    I love the idea and the running narrative, it's really humorous and relatable! Good job and good luck!
    The story of Hope
    The story of Hope
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    Pain, love and fear..... a boy. She didn't know that one human being could change her life forever. This is her story.
    tooflytocare
    4 years ago
    Thank you so much :D Thanks for reading the story my co-author and I really appreciate it!
    angel715
    4 years ago
    I love it. Good job
  • Crosbie
    4 years agoReply
    Your narratives are great, it's almost as if its a constant train of thought, which is really funny and incredibly relatable. This is great, good luck! :)
    Falling for You
    Falling for You
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    Hi I'm Mia Dawn, and this is my so called life. I've got a mum who spends most of her days glued to the computer, constantly looking for, 'Mr Magic' as she likes to refer to him; Then there's Devon, I...
  • Crosbie
    4 years agoReply
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    Ahhh you're brilliant! I love the original idea, the characters, the set out of the stanzas in the prologue, just...everything. You are truly a worthy opponent :P
    It's Possible
    It's Possible
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    *For the Young Movellist of the Year Competition* Autumn is a normal girl, yet she's been travelling the world with her Dad ever since her Mother died of a car crash years ago. On the night of New Year’s...
  • Crosbie
    4 years agoReply
    Absolutely brill! Varied paragraph length is maybe something to look into, but love he story, love the characters, love the book!
    The Secret of Highway House
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    Highway House should've been famous, should've gone down in history alongside the other intellectual giants of the Second World War, alongside Bletchley Park. But when Lizzie McMorely is recruited to carry...
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