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  • cookieemonster
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    Well I think for the readers sake and your own, you should practice and maybe edit your story to make it grammatically correct. Other than that it is a pretty decent story.
    Crimson arrow
    Crimson arrow
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    A archer goes by the name of the crimson arrow is determined to rid his city of all the poison in it along the way he meets a princess who helps him along his journey but can they survive the traitor...
  • cookieemonster
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    I think you need to check your grammar.
    Crimson arrow
    Crimson arrow
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    A archer goes by the name of the crimson arrow is determined to rid his city of all the poison in it along the way he meets a princess who helps him along his journey but can they survive the traitor...
  • cookieemonster
    This is AWESOME DUDE!!! I can't wait for more! :D
    Beyond The Grave
    Beyond The Grave
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    Gemma Noel is a normal 14 year old. She has a best friend, a crush and spends lots of time shopping and reading... oh, and she's dead! Gemma is quite used to being ignored seeing as the living can't see...
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