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  • pleasedeletethisaccount

    mumbled "Quick & Urgent"

    hey if you are reading this I need your help! I have an idea for 2 stories comment or kik me which one you'd read...
    dimitria sabrina de'von is a normal teenager untill she meets Jaklin a vibrant eltrical 14 year old. Jaklin stuns Dimitria and befriends here. Jaklin has been all over the world with her mum and now is in a small provence called Sudbury in Canada. Dimitria on the other hand has always been stuck in this "glue trap" of a town. she wants everything but what Sudbury has to offer. Jaklin introduces Dimitria to a new world. And just let me out it into mortal language The Greek Gods Exist. Jaklin is a goddess of vampires, she has a doppelganger take care of her work in Olymous and she live the life of the Western Civiltazion teen. Can Dimitria take the news, can she even believe it? Well she has to because she is an angel gaurdian set to protect Jakiln from hunters, trackers, devil childern, and Diablo... Diablo the sexy angel, vampire, and humanted goddess hunter. Prophacies made, dimitria falls in and out of love. balencing teenage shit and hormons to saving the universe from hades? All for what? A seat on Olympus after she dies, eternal life, a mortal life time of happiness? Could you handel it?

    That one would be called"They Exist" and It'd be a series with a possible partner! :)

    Next is an open peotry book, kik me your poetry and it'd be published in your name!
  • pleasedeletethisaccount
    i dont understand the plot and Gwens character... I like the underdog comparison. I think you could pick a better reader to draw in the reader because just with the starting unfinished chapter i am not drawed in. I like the 5th sentence itts a nice grouping line! :) Will you check out my story Changes and maybe like or leave feedback?
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    An adventurous tale with a you beautiful girl named Gweneth meeting her inspiration a a CD signing. Meet Gwens beautiful personality and her beautiful tale of one of the most tragic time get to know a...
  • pleasedeletethisaccount
    is it a song or a poem? I ile the similes and metefores great in that concept. I know from writing myself the lines are really long and hard to flow together. I like the repetative line "Cause if you catch me, I wouldnt mide to fall" it has a strong "bonded" rythem so it is a good represanative line! I think the 1st line is kinda childish and sets in off into a different beat and flow which imbalences the whole appomanyment. I like the 2 lines started with whisper because they go in a nice compatable flow and have innatailly soothing lyrics! :) Would you check out my movella Changes?
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  • pleasedeletethisaccount
    deep, strong, vivid in pain, vivid in oaast. Great job, sad, depressing, great! All i can say I really have no critisism! Keep writing! :) WIll you check out my story Changes?
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    Allie is born with a facial disfigurement. She decided from the age of nine she would be single forever. Then Tom comes along.
    Raspberry♥
    5 years ago
    haha thankyou :) and yep :D
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