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Both books will remain on this site but I will not be publishing any new chapters until further notice.

  • Cate Morgan

    mumbled "800 READS!"

    4 years agoReply
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    Last night my Movella, Escapade, hit 800 reads and I could not be more excited. I know that it's not much compared to other books, but for me it definitely is.
    Eight.
    Hundred.
    Reads.
    That's fantastic. I just want to thank you all for reading it, and liking it, and putting it on your favorites list. It means so much to me.
    -Rea
  • Cate Morgan
    4 years agoReply
    1 Like
    I really, really like this.
    A few things I noticed;
    1. Example: "You have got to be kidding me, Marshall. I told you that the kids were coming home at three today, not four!" Andrea picked her keys up from her desk top and quickly grabbed her purse. Marshall sat unconcerned at the other end of the line, listening to his wife running through the parking lot, heels clicking on the pavement, and slamming the car door. "Yes, and I thought you would be home by then!" He replied, spinning his chair around the office carelessly.
    You will notice that, one, there are /no/ commas after their quotes. Commas are not needed after the quotation marks, ever. Also, all punctuation is /inside/ the quotation marks, not outside. Two, their quotes are in the same paragraph which is not correct. Every time a character speaks, it is on a new line. Example:
    "You have got to be kidding me, Marshall. I told you that the kids were coming home at three today, not four!" Andrea picked the keys from the table and quickly grabbed her purse. Marshall sat unconcerned at the other end of the line, listening to his wife run out of the house and slam the door.
    [This sentence moved to a new line] "Yes, and I thought you would be home by then!" He replied, spinning his chair around the office carelessly.
    Andrea would then reply on another line, and the paragraph would continue. Like this: “This is the second time in a month that you have done this,” [comma/punctuation inside the quotation marks] Andrea pushed the key into the ignition and listened to the car roar to life. “It’s getting out ridiculous! You know I can’t be home before four, and if I am my boss freaks out!” She yelled, leaning her cheek on her shoulder to hold the phone as she backed hastily out of the parking lot.
    2. I noticed a few other people comment on this so I won’t say too much; watch for past and present tenses! I still mess those up all the time and I have been writing for as long as I can remember. They’re such a pain.
    I am very excited to see where this goes. Please update soon! This is definitely going on my favorite’s list. :)
    -Rea
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    Banished, Betrayed, Forgotten. Raven has nothing but herself, a mysterious black cat, and a curious black bird as company as she tries to survive the trials of the dark forest. Hated, Feared, Chased. With...
  • Cate Morgan

    mumbled "Updates~"

    4 years agoReply
    Hello human life forms, I bring you good (and bad?) news!
    I have decided, after about 15 minutes of hard thinking to remove Identification, and quite possibly Liquidum to work on and finish them privately.
    Escapade WILL be continued, I just don't know when. And as for my newest book, Jump, I will be updating every Wednesday or Thursday, depending on my schedule.
    If you want to keep up with me, follow ourmountainsound_ on Instagram! Leave a comment below and I will check out a Movella of your choosing and leave feedback. :)
    -Rea
    iluv1D4eva
    4 years ago
    Could you look at this? I would appreciate it!

    RavenBanished, Betrayed, Forgotten. Raven has nothing but herself, a mysterious black cat, and a curious black bird as company as she tries to survive the...
    Cate Morgan
    4 years ago
    @angellll I actually use Google drive for all of my writing, so everything is over there. Thank you, though!! :)
  • Cate Morgan
    4 years agoReply
    It hasn't been updated in a while, but I would still love some feedback? :)
    Escapade[after strong consideration, Escapade is 'under construction' and will be resumed at the end of this semester.] [[description being revised]]
  • Cate Morgan

    mumbled "ID: 0"

    5 years agoReply
    Check out my new book! I'm writing it for the Virtual Worlds competition. :)
    Identification: 0Cage lived in a world where the only places you could go was the high-end vacation spots that were programmed into your mind. You could travel to those...
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