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  • chrissie
    4 years agoReply
    Just read the latest additions to your book .....wow .... you feel as if you are really there experiencing Helena's fears and emotions. So what they are in small doses but it doesn't stop the continuity of the story from chapter to chapter and I can understand how difficult it must be fitting in writing with the pressures of homework, school and all the other activities you are involved in. You demonstrate a variety of writing techniques and this adds interest to the story with some wonderful ideas of what life may be like in the future....... I sincerely hope it does not come to this!! Please,
    please continue writing this story I can't wait to read what happens to Helena next. A proud Grandma X
    Runaway
    Runaway
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    The year is 2150 and life is very different.The world is on the brink of a revolution Helena has run away from her family, who enslaved her, and has nothing.Can she find hope...?
    Issy123
    4 years ago
    Thank you so much!
  • chrissie
    5 years agoReply
    Just read chapter 4 and can't wait for the rest. J K Rowling 'eat your heart out ...... watch out here comes Issy. A proud Grandma X
    Runaway
    Runaway
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    2149
    16
    The year is 2150 and life is very different.The world is on the brink of a revolution Helena has run away from her family, who enslaved her, and has nothing.Can she find hope...?
    Issy123
    4 years ago
    Thankyou very much
  • chrissie
    5 years agoReply
    Wow! Excellent use of language.
    A spark of hope
    A spark of hope
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    This story explores the life of two girls with very different backgrounds, who become great friends
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