FemaleUnited KingdomMember since 2 Jan 13Age 20Last online 4 years ago

Moooooorning all.
^ This greeting is not just reserved to mornings and can be used any time of the day.
I'm 16, what my friends describe as borderline-psychotic, messed-up and 'individual'. I don't know whether to be proud or insulted by this.
I love reading to the point where I pretty much don't leave the house any more.
I also like apples, blowing bubblegum bubbles, MCR and sudoku.
Oh, and writing.

  • chezmarie
    5 years agoReply
    I really really really love this. Well done for winning :)
    Seriously, this is BRILLIANT.
    I think I actually fell in love with this (slowly and then all at once, possibly); in part because I feel I can relate to this a bit.
    Seriously, though, it's amazing :D
    "I fell in love the way you fall asleep. Slowly, and then all at once."
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    Entry for Movellas 2013 John Green competition. Based off of the quote "I fell in love the way you fall asleep. Slowly, and then all at once." from The Fault in Our Stars.
  • chezmarie
    5 years agoReply
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    It will get better, eventually.
    I think I'm in the process of getting better now - I've spent the last two years cutting and feeling suicidal pretty much 24/7. I let my grades drop (I'm now failing most subjects), I pushed away my friends, but it is getting better.
    I clearly remember thinking 'It might get better for other people but it will never get better for me' etc, but even if you do think this PLEASE don't kill yourself because the getting better is so worth the wait.
    You don't have to stop cutting, you don't have to suddenly try and become happy all the time if you don't want to, or if you can't.
    But please don't kill yourself, because there seriously are still things to live for, even if you can't see them yet.
    Suicidal thought's :(
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    It is my diary every word of it and im doing this because I want people to relise what they put me you know oh well lol
  • chezmarie
    5 years agoReply
    This is amazing :D (thanks for reviewing my movellas btw)
    I really like how the lyrics don't point straight to the title. Not that it doesn't fit - what I mean is in some songs the title makes up a large part of the chorus or whatever, whereas in this one the title is just alluded to.
    I also really like how you made it rhyme without making it corny :D
    I was planning to make this 2 things I like and then one thing I didn't, but the only problem I can see with it is a couple of spelling mistakes, and nothing wrong with the song itself.
    The same as the other person reviewed - I would also really like to hear someone singing this.
    And the outfit sounds amazing :)
    The swan
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    Just a little song I wrote about a swan, I hope you like it x Copyright (c)
    xxJenJenxx
    5 years ago
    Thank you, I'm very glad you like it! :D Please could you point out the spelling mistakes, thanks x
    chezmarie
    5 years ago
    On the 7th line inspiration is spelt inspiartion.
    On the 10th line, probably is spelt probobly.
    On the line "So maybe I'm a theist" do you mean 'so maybe I'm an atheist'?
    On the line after that, biased is spelt biassed.
    That's all, I think.
    Btw, I wrote it so that the correct spelling is first, and then the way you spelt is was second.
    xxJenJenxx
    5 years ago
    Thank you x
  • chezmarie

    Please read my movella?

    5 years agoReply
    I just added it, it's called Falling from the Moon. It's only one chapter so far, but I would love some criticism? :)
    ToryB
    4 years ago
    I am starting a new review book and if you would like to feature on it or suggest another person's work to review please say so on the new discussion I have just introduced. :) Or if you are interested in being a co-author and helping with the reviews you could too. :)
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