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  • CheniceAmelia

    mumbled "Feedback?"

    Would really really really LOVE any feedback on my scary horror story! I don't mind good or bad, positive parts or constructive criticism...just want some as its literally the second story I've ever written :) it would be so helpful! >>
    Always Watching.*Written for the 'Say Her Name' writing competition* A group of three friends (Bobbie, Naya and Caine) are dared to say "Bloody Mary" into the bathroom...
  • CheniceAmelia

    mumbled "The Beauty of Existing. "

    It really would mean a lot if people could give me feedback on my first story I've written :) Good or bad, it just would be really helpful. Its a short story I'm entering in The Fault In Our Stars competition (Its not a fanfic).
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    The Beauty Of Existing.Harrison, a 17-year-old boy diagnosed with leukemia, is hospitalized in order to receive treatment. However in his eyes the dark depressing atmosphere...
    <<<<< Please? :)
  • CheniceAmelia
    FEEDBACK would really be appreciated, as it's the first time I've written anything :)
    The Beauty Of Existing.
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    Harrison, a 17-year-old boy diagnosed with leukemia, is hospitalized in order to receive treatment. However in his eyes the dark depressing atmosphere of the hospital is more similar to prison entrapping...
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    This is really good! You should write more often :)
  • CheniceAmelia
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    I would love if people could give me feedback :D
    Augustus Waters, an in-erasable mark.
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    A continuation of the ending of the book, set 3 months later. An insight into Hazels feelings surrounding Gus' death and how she's feeling after being permanently hospitalised. she then has a beautiful...
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