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Hey! c;
Welcome to my profile! I hope you enjoy my Movellas! I like positive feedback and help!

I'm afraid I don't do Movellas fast! So please be patient with me!

I would LOVE to read your Movella if you have one. I am good at giving helpful feedback and I like ALL types of stories so don't be afraid to ask if you want me to read your Movellas!
Again, hope you enjoy my Movellas!

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  • Warm Blood
    Warm Blood
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  • Unbreaking Fire
    Unbreaking Fire
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  • Chaz
    4 years agoReply
    Waiting for the next chapter...
    Sun's Joy: Academy of Despair
    Sun's Joy: Academy...
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    Sixteen students carrying the world's hopes on their shoulders suddenly find themselves in the academy of their dreams. But this hope soon turns to despair as they find there is no way out. Well, unless...
  • Chaz
    4 years agoReply
    The 'Zone' chapter helped me. :)
    Writing Techniques & Tips
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    Writing techniques are one of the most important aspects for whatever you write. Used correctly, they can make the story more interesting , whether that by by using descriptive words, or adding in punctuation...
    Eve Smallman
    4 years ago
    I'm glad it did :)
  • Chaz
    4 years agoReply
    Love it!
    Will there be a next chapter? Please say yes. :O
    Deceived
    Deceived
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    The bloodbath. The make-or-break moment in the Hunger Games. In the first few minutes, roughly half of the children that entered the arena will be dead. This is the bloodbath shown through the eyes of...
    Pochapal
    4 years ago
    Actually, this is part of my other story Surprises, so read that if more is required. :P
    SierraMellark
    4 years ago
    kk thnx i love your other book 66th hunger games you should enter the first chapter in the contest good luck
    Pochapal
    4 years ago
    Really?! Compared to my recent works, the 66th Games isn't as good. XD
    But I prefer to have the one entry per contest, so as to not unfairly increase my chances; if you're good enough, one entry should be enough. :P
  • Chaz
    5 years agoReply
    Love it! Awaiting next chapter!
    Near the end you spelled a "apologizing" wrong.
    Other than that I think this is a brilliant work of art! Awaiting the next chapter!
    Hello You
    Hello You
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    Being stood up for a date on Valentine’s Day is not what Harry Styles had in mind as he sat in a small coffee shop. Meeting a girl who had also been stood up was also not what Harry had planned, but in...
    downandnotout
    5 years ago
    I haven't actually spelt 'apologizing' wrong I'm afraid. I'm British, and that is how the British spell 'apologising', but thanks for your review! :D
  • Chaz
    5 years agoReply
    Love it! Gives a nice welcoming start!
    Ah! I spotted that you only have one big paragraph! Major no-no! You should always seperate your paragraphs so you won't overwhelm the reader! And WORK ON THE PUNCTUATION! Haha!
    Like I said, love the work.
    Oh and when you use dialogue, you are making some mistakes. Here is a helpful example of dialogue!
    Ex:
    "You're late for school, Mark!" my mom called out
    or
    "Come on bro," Chris urged,"We won't get caught!"

    So work on those things,but this is still a beautiful piece of writing!
    Keep it up!
    Awaiting next chapter!! :D
    The Emerald Isle
    The Emerald Isle
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    Sixteen year old Skyler Mcneese has always known that she was different. Ever since the day that her mom left when she was only six years old everything in her life changed. She began seeing things that...
    Blondie15
    5 years ago
    Thank you!:) and I know I have always really struggled with punctuation and grammar but love writing which is kind of a weir combination:D haha but anyways thank u so much:)
    Chaz
    5 years ago
    Hahaha of course! I hope I'm not overwhelming you with my critique. XD
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