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  • chansc
    4 years agoReply
    there are a few sentence structure problems but it is even much more coherent than Amity. i also feel that this is a great improvement in terms of the concept of a story
    Partly Human
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  • chansc
    4 years agoReply
    first thing clear is that this story's language and writing style is heaven compared to your previous story. =) However, the ending seem too blunt.
    Amity
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