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  • CallmeJane
    3 years agoReply
    Good start so far. I think the lot of information is a pretty smart idea because it tells us there is a lot going on that we have to figure out. Seanlaoch seems like a pretty round character, but because his personality sjofteo a lot it was hard to make him seem life like. This kind of remind me of wicked lovely by Melissa marr. A little more like her second book when it comes to the faery intwining with a "normal girls" life. Also things like "court " a d especially "summer wine" seems good though
    Project Galatea
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    Centuries ago, the faery courts engineered 12 weapons with the aid of their pixie cousins. These weapons would help them survive the modern age of man and they have now been honed and tested. The weapons...
    W Mufunde
    3 years ago
    Sorry what? There's a typo in your comment. his personality is what? Why is it hard to make him seem life like? How can that be the case if your said he seems pretty well rounded?
    I'm a great fan of Wicked Lovely and I think the prologue does emulate her style but I am trying to do my own thing and you'll notice a very different tone from her books by the first chapter since there is quite a lot of action. I hoped that the prologue could ease the reader in a little bit before the next chapter goes full-throttle.
  • CallmeJane
    3 years agoReply
    So far I think this is a pretty good story. I love the idea of her trying to reinvent herself and also the mystery with Ellis. I think Sophie will become sort of a badass character lol, good so far . just really light hearted and simple. I plan to finish reading but I work soo much :p so I promise to continue afterwards
    The New Me
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    After a bad experience at her old school, Hayden Flack moves to Bradley Stoke determined to change everything about herself. She knows how act, what to wear and from past experience, what to expect....
    Nina :)
    3 years ago
    Thanks, although don't feel like you have to read this unless you want to :)
  • CallmeJane

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    3 years agoReply
    Hi guys im new! Would you be interested in checking out my extremely short story? It takes like 40 seconds to read. Read and leave comments! Good ones bad ones, anything that'll help me. Like seriously hold nothing back! I P-R-O-M-I-S-E to do the same! I just want to have new readers get a taste of my writing style :)

    The Perfect GlassWhen everything seems perfect, It cant possibly feel this way...
  • CallmeJane

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    3 years agoReply
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    Hi guys im new! Would you be interested in checking out my extremely short story? It takes like 40 seconds to read. Read and leave comments! Good ones bad ones, anything that'll help me. Like seriously hold nothing back! I P-R-O-M-I-S-E to do the same! I just want to have new readers get a taste of my writing style :)

    The Perfect GlassWhen everything seems perfect, It cant possibly feel this way...
    Nina :)
    3 years ago
    I've left a comment - it's really well written :)
  • CallmeJane

    Click Here!

    3 years agoReply
    Hi guys im new! Would you be interested in checking out my extremely short story? It takes like 40 seconds to read. Read and leave comments! Good ones bad ones, anything that'll help me. Like seriously hold nothing back! I P-R-O-M-I-S-E to do the same! I just want to have new readers get a taste of my writing style :)

    The Perfect GlassWhen everything seems perfect, It cant possibly feel this way...
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