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  • To Dad, on Father's Day
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  • Edgeworth's Lament
    Edgeworth's Lament
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  • Silly Limericks
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  • Puns.
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  • C.P.
    3 years agoReply
    A beautiful piece of writing. This doesn't rhyme all that well, but the imagery is fantastic. I particularly like the line: "The Universe is formed of stories, not atoms."
    The Story
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    My poem was inspired by my love and passion for stories so here I attempted to capture that magic. I also tried to intertwine some of the Olympic themes hence "Inspire a generation" etc This is my...
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    The worst punctuational mistakes you have seen

    5 years agoReply
    We've all seen mistakes with grammar and punctuation, but are there any that really stand out as being extremely horrid, or stupid? I'll give you an example of a mistake I saw at an open evening for a school. There was a display board on "A Midsummer Night's Dream" with no apostrophe!
     River_Summers ☕️
    A notice for a new film, 'Two weeks notice,' instead of 'Two weeks' notice.'
  • C.P.
    5 years agoReply
    Wow! I really like this poem, especially the huge range of vocabulary and all of the awesome metaphors. This deserves way more like!
    WINTER
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    WINTER CAME CURLING.
  • C.P.
    5 years agoReply
    I really like it, but at the end, where it says 'I run down the stairs, straight out of the door...', there's a large gap between that and the last few lines.
    Not His Girl
    Not His Girl
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    Cassia's life is perfect. Awesome friends. Awesome hair. Awesome clothes. And -most of all - an awesome boyfriend. But everything is about to change. It all starts with that one photo...
    quillfeather
    5 years ago
    Oh yeah, it does that sometimes. I think it's just dodgy formatting!
  • C.P.
    5 years agoReply
    I really like it, please write more! I want to find out what happens next!
    Forever Flawed
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    This is my entry for the bullying competition. The trailer is not mine but one I found on Youtube, no copyright intended. The story opened my eyes which is why I wanted to show it to you, so you can have...
    AutumnFyre
    5 years ago
    Thanks I will soon - glad you enjoyed it! :-)
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