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I am a beginner writer.

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  • bunnygirl kitten
    I like the story so far, I also like how you made her Straight... But.. How did people find out she liked Tristan? Since she had been whispering, and they had only hugged... It would be like hugging your "bestfriend".. . >3>
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    Imagine A World Where Being "Gay" The Norm & Being "Straight" Would Be The Minority! ____________________________________ Not suitable for younger viewers due to suicidal thoughts, bullying, violence...
    Time
    3 years ago
    Ok! Thank you xx I will consider changing that! X <3
  • bunnygirl kitten
    Your English isn't horrible, most of it is alright. there are a few parts I saw that were off by a spelling ,but that is alright. I am from an English speaking country and even I get it wrong half the time.
    I love how it is going so far, the idea of the wisps is always fun. And the part where his parents died was interesting as well.
    I personally love the name Castiel, and I love how she called him "little man" as if it was a tribal pack, I like your idea so far and hope there is more in the future :)
    Little Castiel
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    The Little wolf cub Castiel, have lost his mother and siblings. How will the life be for the little thing now, when he is all alone in this World. He will learn how to live and fight for food in a very...
    Bl4cksm1th
    3 years ago
    Thank you :) I'm working on a chapther right now, but it might take a Little while, since it's not really working out how i wanted it to be. but sure theres gonna be more.
    Really thank you, it Means alot to me :)

  • bunnygirl kitten

    mumbled "Horrible at writing?"

    Gah, I am terrible at writing ;;
    bunnygirl kitten
    3 years ago
    It is... i mean I am writing a story called Winds of Time... and... IDK I... Pifft I want outside opinion but I am scared to ask, but I know my writing skills are terrible..
    Prodigy
    3 years ago
    Would you like a bit of CC? As long as it's not a fanfiction I'll do it :) Believe me, when I started I was pretty bad as well... I like to think I've gotten better :D
    bunnygirl kitten
    3 years ago
    Sure. No worries, I can't write fanfictions to save my life so yeah. it's not.

    Winds of TimeIt is about a small town girl, in the future, her life takes a turn when she meets Sam. A tall mysterious man. But the true adventure starts when she ends...
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