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  • TamiKay
    3 years agoReply
    I like this chapter 21, starts making sense...,
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    "Yeah, we used to have some good times together." The words slipped through my mouth without me even thinking. I looked at Liam who's face had gone pale, and then Louis. His expression was blank. Then...
  • TamiKay
    3 years agoReply
    Ch 16 is confusing. Why is Kayla with Harry and Liam and having one of them invite Louis to lunch. Why does she sit beside Liam at lunch. Why is there no conversation between Louis and Kayla at lunch. If she has told Liam that he had his chance and she's with Louis in previous chapter, then her behavior makes no sense. Also there's alot of people talking during lunch and I sometimes can't tell who's talking and not much of it seems to move the story along. This is the first chapter that's confused me. Overall, really really enjoying! THANKS!
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    "Yeah, we used to have some good times together." The words slipped through my mouth without me even thinking. I looked at Liam who's face had gone pale, and then Louis. His expression was blank. Then...
    Afternoon.Delight
    It will all make sense soon, I promise. I'll have to go back and fix the conversations though. I just read it and it is a little confusing.
  • TamiKay
    3 years agoReply
    of course the title makes me think Kayla stays with Louis.
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    "Yeah, we used to have some good times together." The words slipped through my mouth without me even thinking. I looked at Liam who's face had gone pale, and then Louis. His expression was blank. Then...
    Afternoon.Delight
    Liam is somebody she used to know and maybe one day Louis will be that person? Or maybe she doesn't even know Louis?
  • TamiKay
    3 years agoReply
    I'm your aunt. 52 yr young. Don't want to get with Niall. But I love the story and your writing! Really great. And I feel for Louis but think Kayla and Liam probably have better chemistry...
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    "Yeah, we used to have some good times together." The words slipped through my mouth without me even thinking. I looked at Liam who's face had gone pale, and then Louis. His expression was blank. Then...
    Afternoon.Delight
    I love you Tam...
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