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“What do you want?"
"Just coffee. Black - like my soul.” -Cassandra Clare

I guess I should just give you the basics about myself: I'm 17 years old. I'm from the US. I enjoy cats and spaghetti and 5Sos. I also really like to read and write and I waste my summer doing school work because I like to take a million and one AP Classes.

AWARDS:
- Silver in On Dublin Street: Love and Loss Competition (Kaleidoscope of Memories).
- Shortlisted for Fanfiction of The Year 2012 (No Words Are Needed)
- Little Mix Competition (Mix It Up!)


Go check out 'A Tea Filled Summer', it's my most prized piece of writing. You can check out Slowly, which is both a one-shot and currently being made into a short story.

I hope you all enjoy my writing and leave wonderful comments about how amazing and beautiful I am.

If you want to read other works, read anything in my favorites and I do have a list and a book of recommended reads, which I will be adding to again. Because I forgot how much fun it was to do that.

S/O to my favorites, Lia, ICG, Sakura, Hopeless Wanderer, Katy Erin, UMK, Toxic Fiction, LoveOfTheMusic, and Aunty Midnight,

Peace, love, and carrots.
Stay true, y'all.

  • Kierstinnn

    mumbled "Kill Me, Please."

    2 weeks agoReply
    I have a 15 page Stalin essay to write. This sucks. And I hate everything else in life. So, make me feel less hateful.
  • Kierstinnn
    1 months agoReply
    I'm just saying, if she gets back with him I'll be very upset. But I'm very upset already because I hate those two.
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    You can't decide whether money changes things or not; it does. You can decide, however, whether it changes things for better or worse.
    Katy Erin
    1 months ago
    I know, they are both so mean :(
    Katy Erin
    1 months ago
    And Merry Christmas by the way! X
  • Kierstinnn
    1 months agoReply
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    This is so good! I love her characterization. I love the length of the chapters, and I love how nicely you've put this all together. I do have a few suggestions.
    I think there may be a slight overuse of exclamation points. It's not enough to take away from the story, but I'd say use words to express that she's excited or nervous rather than exclamation points, outside of dialogue that is.
    Your building of a relationship between characters is great. Between Scott and Bella. Between Bella and Liam. Between Sam and Santi. Between Liam and Scott. All so nicely done.
    There are a few grammatical errors I had noticed, just things like 'then' where 'than' should have been. Nothing major.
    Overall, an amazing story and easily one of the best fanfictions I have read on here. I have liked, favorited, and fanned! Keep up the awesome writing!
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    Bella is going through a difficult time in her life. With the death of her older sister Amy, she is finding life extremely hard. Thinking a new start in life will help, her parents decide to move countries...
    ninarose
    1 months ago
    Thank you so much for reading and liking my story, this was such a nice review. I realize that I do sometimes make grammatical errors, my writing is not perfect but I am working on it. I appreciate the feedback though, I would rather people be honest with me so no worries ;) I will also take your suggestions on board, it actually helped when I was writing the next chapter so thanks for that too. Hope you continue to like my story! :)
  • Kierstinnn
    1 months agoReply
    So, I've read to roughly chapter nine. I have a few suggestions. You stated that you're new at this, so I'll just give you a few pointers.
    The story moves very quickly. It's hardly ever that someone truly falls in love on their first day of meeting each other. Infatuation is one thing- love is another. I was with my boyfriend for nearly three and a half months before either one of us said "I love you." It's kind of a big thing and the story doesn't really treat it like it is.
    I'd like to hear more inner thoughts, if that makes sense. I'd like for her to say how she feels when she finds out that her mother dies; how if she wouldn't have left that day, she'd have been dead as well. The cutting obviously shows her upsetness(not a word but I'm going to act like it is), but always use words over actions in stories.
    Finally, there's just a few little things that are inconsistent. Like the fact that Luke doesn't tell her where his room is and she just knows.
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    averyl_rose
    1 months ago
    Took the words right out of my mouth
    Directioner5555
    1 months ago
    Well "KIERSTINNN"you are soooooo wrong because its beautiful written with thoughts or without thoughts but at least your right about one thing her just knowing where his room is but Manet she saw him walk in his room and that's how she knows
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    You guys, as amazing as the story is, Kierstin is right about what she said. But other than that, the story is amazing. But she's right the story does move a little bit too quick.
  • Kierstinnn
    1 months agoReply
    Wait.. Is this like a sequel to The Third Wheel or just the same character names? Because I missed something huge if it's a sequel.
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    TheArtist
    1 weeks ago
    How am I just seeing this comment??? No it's not really a sequel more like spin-off or an entirely different story just for them :)
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