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  • NotveryCommon
    This is so good Vick. Just an error in chapter five. Its lose not loose. Loose is like something that's dangling or less sturdy. Not on something dproperly basically. 5/5 so far!! It is an amazing story and you have planned it really well! X
    Hiding Lies
    Hiding Lies
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    "The heart should decide what it wants, but at times, you need to ignore it and follow your head. Or follow the car." // Leah Rouge, a girl set on what she wants with her heart claimed by someone who wants...
    Victoria Raven
    2 years ago
    Thank you!

    I'm hoping to re-write the entire thing, same characters, same plot but longer and with more detail and more realistic.
    NotveryCommon
    2 years ago
    No its amazing already! Btw its Amy! X
  • NotveryCommon
    Book review:
    Fantastic writing skills. Kept realism throughout. to improve this maybe add more describing words. use sensed like sound or smell. describe them.
    Clash Of Elements
    Clash Of Elements
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    In a world were magic is widespread and people are able to use it since childhood, a certain teenager lives in a small village. On his sixteenth Birthday Alexander Fairchild goes to the annual ceremony...
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