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Hey there! I've been writing since I was four, my first short story about a dragon and two lizards which I may rewrite one day. Ever since then I've mostly dabbled in fantasy but I've also done other genres such as Sci-Fi and Crime Fiction.

The Writer's World - some advice?

by , Wednesday May 2, 2018
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The Writer's World - some advice?

The Writing World is crazy but how did I get here? How did you get here? How do we welcome newcomers to this craziness?


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  • Katie Pharoah
    Ooh, great start and the premise is very interesting. Looking forward to seeing what the "battle between constellations" means and how it develops :)
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    Kevin was a normal teenager with a normal life. What happens though when he figures out his mom's past, and what he and his older brother actually are? What happens when their existence cause a battle...
  • Katie Pharoah
    Love the line; "The dark side of the ocean has welcomed me with opened arms," looking forward to future chapters :)
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    From screaming to deafening silence, these are truly some of the best poems I've wrote by far.
    Ransom
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    @[Katie Pharoah] Well Thank You! I really appreciate it, will be posting more poems in the future (And some tonight)! <3
  • Katie Pharoah
    These are amazing! I love the simplicity of Puppetmaster and My Sweet Little Piece of Hell flows with a certain kind of lyricism. You sure can write :)
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    En samling af digte, som jeg har skrevet undervejs i min kamp med depression og de følgelidelser, som den har bragt med sig. Dette projekt er meget personligt for mig, da det er en kamp som jeg stadig...
  • Katie Pharoah
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    I love this! You've introduced the characters well and got me hooked to favourite it. I did find the beginning of Chapter Two a bit jarring with how you've directly followed it from Chapter One, however - I don't know what it is but it didn't feel as natural as I would have liked?
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    His life was one of guilt; he knew he ought not feel, ought not year for the woman of his friend's joy, but the impossible is impossible and dear regard always remains true, even to the last, when one...
    Eileen Prince
    5 days ago
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    :) Thank you and, if you do figure out what it is that doesn't make it natural, just let me know!
  • Katie Pharoah
    This is good so far, the only thing I can point out is to space out your speech to make it easier to follow :)
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    Kimimaru Kurosaki has been a soul reaper for a very long time. She has seen many court guards captains come and go. She gained her power through an old friend of hers. He 'died' on a mission while protecting...
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