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  • Booklover19
    3 years agoReply
    Wow this story is amazing! It's a really original idea and how you've described all the books, especially Harry Potter, is perfect. The use of poetic language definitely works brilliantly. Good luck in the competition and honestly this is one of best movellas I've ever read.
    Life in Lexis
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    Here on Movellas, everybody loves reading. But what if reading could love you back? For the UK live competition. Based on the song Arrival of the Birds, by The Cinematic Orchestra, which is an instrumental...
    Katface
    3 years ago
    Oh wow, thank-you so much! I'm seriously so glad that you like it so much, you have no idea how much such kind words mean to me :)
  • Booklover19
    3 years agoReply
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    I really like your story. Dakota is a well defined character and the romance between her and Troy is really sweet. I definitely think there's scope to develop the story and good luck with competition.
    The Terrible Life of Dakota.
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    Dear Diary, I'm sick of hiding who I am. But I can't face them. That's too hard. Maybe life's easier while you hide your face, so no one can see how different you are. Love, Dakota. 'The Terrible...
    tinnedc
    3 years ago
    Thank you, that means a lot to me. I'm trying to write a new chapter, but I'm working on a lot of other stories too, which often gives me a writers block... So I'm not sure yet what to do with this one, but I really want to work on it sooner or later! Thank you again, for your comment and if there's anything else you want to tell me, just tell it!
  • Booklover19
    3 years agoReply
    I really like the idea and the ending of the prologue is really good. The only thing I would say is that the prologue feels a little bit long but it's all important information so maybe you use Catarina to tell the reader some of the information. I'm interested to see what will happen next and good luck with the competition.
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    ---For the Ava Lavender Competition--- A whole new world was introduced then. Built on corruption and secrets. We were imprisoned, tortured to test our strength, our feat of will. The majority of us...
    A.C.Martins
    3 years ago
    Thank you for the feedback! I really appreciate it and I'm glad you like the idea :) I know what you mean with the prologue, I just don't know where to start. I feel like if I did leave it for later on, it would have to be a little bit more later on and the word limit is 3000 and I needed to fit in a little bit more story. Word limit problems...
    I'm updating it now actually and thanks again!! I means a lot :) :) :)
    Booklover19
    3 years ago
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    The new chapters are really good.
    A.C.Martins
    3 years ago
    Thank you!! :)
  • Booklover19
    3 years agoReply
    It's a brilliant idea for a story and it's cool that it starts off with a character who's an adult because most movellas don't do that. I'm interested to see what happens next and good luck with competition.
    I am alone
    I am alone
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    Zara receives a letter from her mother who she can hadly remember and sets about finding her.
  • Booklover19
    3 years agoReply
    Your story is brilliant and I'm very interested to see what will happen next. The characters are well defined and there's lots of suspense. Good luck in the competition.
    Other Classes of Demons
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    A short story for the Ava Lavender writing competition about a young boy who, because of some dark thoughts he has, is convinced he is evil.
    Larasito
    3 years ago
    Thank you so much :)
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