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"I wish I was strong enough to lift not one but both of us" Badges: (OvO) [///] (:•:) [#] }>F (:&:) -O-// O O -\ / --\/ ./\_/\ .( . . ) ..\_/ (0)__(0) I * ^ * I ( I(__)I ) (O)(O) If you are nice enough to be one of my fans, you can proudly call yourself a lollipop. Here's a badge: (@)---- . If you have time, I would really appreciate feedback on some of my work. Thank you if you bothered to read this. :)

  • bobsicle

    mumbled "Greenpeace dirty tuna"

    10 hours agoReply
    https://secure.greenpeace.org.uk/dirty-t.. - This video shows the shocking fishing methods used by some tuna companies that are hurting huge numbers of other creatures, including many species of shark and turtle. Please watch it and join the campaign. I realise this isn't why most of you come on here - to get bombarded by eco-ness - but this is important. Please.
  • bobsicle
    10 hours agoReply
    This is really terrifying. You have genuinely creeped me out with your dark and powerful writing and the fearful sense of not knowing. As always with your work, it is the little descriptive details that have a lot of impact. You deserve to win the competition with this. I'm not just saying that, I mean it.
    Lock Your Door
    Lock Your Door
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    for the Trick or Treat competition. Whatever you do, make sure you lock your door tonight.
    sakura❀
    5 hours ago
    Aw thanks so much! It honestly isn't my best, but I love writing horror, so it was a load of fun.
  • bobsicle
    10 hours agoReply
    I love the structure and pattern of this poem as it emphasises the horror elements and makes it seem as though the poem is creeping towards you bit by bit. The language is amazing and creates a strong, dark mood. Good luck in the competition! :)
    Darkened Alley
    Darkened Alley
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    So this is an attempt for the Halloween competition...I haven't really written a proper thriller/horror poem before so hopefully it's scary enough!
    Love2write
    10 hours ago
    Thank you so much, I'm really glad you like it!
    Thanks again for commenting :)
  • bobsicle

    mumbled "Can you help?"

    5 days agoReply
    I haven't written a story for a while and I would quite like to get back into it because it seems like all I can write is poetry now. :( Anyway, I was wondering... Would anyone like to co-author a story with me? I'm open to most genres, although I'm a bit too "romantically inexperienced" for a love story and sci-fi isn't really my thing. Other than that, I would be willing to roll with your ideas. So, if anyone is interested then reply to this mumble with the type of story you would want to write. :)
  • bobsicle
    5 days agoReply
    I really like this poem. The tone and flow gives me a vivid image of someone speaking it out loud because it sounds honest and quite impassioned, as though someone is ranting to me and venting their emotions while I'm sitting there wondering how to help. The use of all the questions gives you a real connection with the reader, as though the voice in the poem is the voice of a friend. :) Liked and faved. :)
    Puzzle Pieces
    Puzzle Pieces
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    I don't really know where this came from...but anyway it's here for you to read :) Sorry if it's depressing haha
    Love2write
    4 days ago
    Thank you very much, I'm glad you like it :)
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