FemaleSpainMember since 6 Oct 12Age 20Last online 2 years ago

Hi, I'm Al:) I'm 16 and I love writting and reading.
I would love to become a writer and I'm writing on movellas because I would really like to see what people think about my writing.
I like Coldplay, Lana Del Rey, Elton John and many other artists but I mainly like Alternative, Rock, Punk and Pop.

Follow me on twitter: @AllyTav
Follow me on tumblr: 30secondstomango.tumblr.com

And please don't hesitate to ask me to read your stuff because I think I'm pretty good at giving a helping hand and I like to read so it's a win win situation :')

Love always,

Al

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  • Blue

    mumbled "I'm back!"

    3 years agoReply
    Heya! So I'm going to write more again:) please give me feedback on what I write because I'd really like to hear your opinions :D
  • Blue
    4 years agoReply
    Andy has really turned into a jerk. Damn
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  • Blue
    4 years agoReply
    please please please update!!
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    4 years agoReply
    I've only read the first chapter but you really do have a great way to show detail. Good start to a story and I will read on:) Good job!
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    thanks! i learn by reading other similar stories and put ideas into detail. thanks for all the support :)
    Blue
    4 years ago
    Even though there's quite a lot of sexuality, I like the humour and the fact you change over the narrator:)
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    Yeah. changing the Point of View gives the story more detail and it gives the reader more to go off of.
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