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  • WildEyed
    6 years agoReply
    wow this gave me a weird sensation when i read it :L thats a good thing tho :P
    I really love this i think its amazing! first i thought your talking about lightening or a storm but im trying to look deeper :P
    Night demons
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    A poem a wrote, can you decipher the message weaved within the words? :D
    Beth...
    6 years ago
    haa good! Thank you :) you're partly right since there was a storm raging on outside when i wrote it but personally i know there is a deeper meaning to it but thank you for reading it! x
  • WildEyed
    6 years agoReply
    I love the way you've put the words together in this story! its so orginal and different, from the start when i read it i was hooked, its engaging and I like how you put samhain ;) lol,,write more! :D
    The earth holds my soul
    The earth holds...
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    Maggie and her friends live a normal life. They go to school, meet up when classes have ended... Nobody suspects the secret that they are hiding. They are witches. This is just the beginning of a story...
    Beth...
    6 years ago
    ahh good thank you! I'm glad you liked it! haa thanks ;) i will try! :D
  • WildEyed
    6 years agoReply
    This is so intriguing! I love the language you've used, its so imaginative, and I can imagine clearly whats happening, it's well written like that :)
    but I found a few miss spelt words that I think you've clicked the wrong letter by mistake,,and also between some words you've forget to put a space and between alot of punctuation theres no space, but a really good story! I can't wait to hear more! :D
    Witch Or Lies!
    Witch Or Lies!
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    Marella is a girl who is utterly confused in a world believing her mother,is the writhing figure that stands before her.She despises her and her cruel and wicked ways so she seeks to find the truth behind...
  • WildEyed
    6 years agoReply
    wow, the way you wind words together is amazing, the way you do that is kind of orginal and you put words together in a different way, I've never seen that before, I really like this story though! its touching and when i read it, it gave me a weird sensation :p thats a good thing though :) can't wait for you to write another story!
    A Free Man
    A Free Man
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    A boy reflects on how love has shaped his life as the person he is today.
  • WildEyed
    6 years agoReply
    :O thats really good! its really descriptive aswell, and interesting, and you best write more! i wana no what happened :L LOL
    Absolute Zero
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    BlueInk
    6 years ago
    Thanks! and LOL I will :D
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