FemaleUnited KingdomMember since 25 Mar 12Age 21Last online 1 years ago

I'm 18, I love to read and have just started to try and write some short stories. I would love feedback on any of my stories and would also love to read anyones stories too :)

  • Beth96
    4 years agoReply
    This is a cool idea and it looks like it will be ace when it's fininshed :)
    Irish Luck and Love...
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    Bella is just a normal directioner. (Directioner- Noun- A person or being obsessed with One Direction) Well, almost normal...
    Pineapple_Noodle
    4 years ago
    Thanks xx, I have good plans for this story, when I get around to it though.
  • Beth96
    4 years agoReply
    This is very detailed and full of great ideas. You are clearly a good writer and I wish you plenty of success :)
    Love Story
    Love Story
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    Ringo was in love, but she hurt him, will telling a bunch of people about how they met, their first kiss, what she did, and the rest of their relationship get him to take her back? Or will he realise that...
  • Beth96
    4 years agoReply
    This is ace and unique. There are a few minor spelling errors but that's easily fixed. You are a good writer and I hope you continue with it :).
    What Now?
    What Now?
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    The life of Aniyah Simmons is an unfortunate one, but when her idol turns up out of nowhere and she gets offered a place in the school of her dreams, will she get there? Or will her controlling father...
    Pineapple_Noodle
    4 years ago
    The spelling mistakes are supposed to be there because it's written from the perspective of a girl who isn't well educated, and I'm also Australian so my spelling is different to that of other countries.
  • Beth96
    4 years agoReply
    Nice idea :) it's great that you can change your ideas to fit each fanfiction :'). Keep it up :')
    Imagine That- Celebrity/Fanfic Imagines...
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    Imagines for any and every sort of celebrity or fanfiction you can think of, if I don't know about your celebrity, I'll do some research, so... Shoot!!
  • Beth96
    4 years agoReply
    This is a unique fan fiction, good ideas. Keep it up :)
    We Need Each Other
    We Need Each Other
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    What happens when good girl Zoë Everdeane, bad girl, and one direction obsessed, Brooke Matthews, and girly girl, Gail Sage meet the biggest Boy band, one direction. What will happen When they bump...
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