FemaleAustraliaMember since 18 Jan 13Last online 5 years ago

I am an author of Young Adult Fiction. I have had two books published: The Birthmark (2006) and Murderer's Thumb (2008). I hope I can help out with adding some constructive comments.

  • Beth901
    5 years agoReply
    Great tension! The ending was so unexpected. I'm just wondering if there needs to be a better transition to the flashback. The font change jolted me out of the story a bit. Instead of it being an obvious memory I had to think 'what is going on here'. Keep writing. You've got a great grasp of suspense.
    A Shattered Mirror
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    This is my entry for the Movellas "Secrets" competition! :) -Everyone has secrets. Everyone has memories. Everyone has a past. Often times, all three come back to haunt us. Seventeen-year-old Tallulah...
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