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Okay, so let me start off with the basics. I'm fifteen, English, I read as much as I can, simply because I love escaping and getting lost in a world that has no boundaries. Writing is something I've always wanted to do (a common dream but it's the truth) and one of my favourite quotes is 'Gather ye rosebuds while ye may, Old time is still a flying; And this same flower that smiles today, tomorrow will be dying.' -Robert Herrick

  • Beth...
    4 years agoReply
    1 Like
    love it keep going!!
    Rite to Life
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    -THIS IS A DYSTOPIAN- In a future, yet illusive world, society is divided into three factions. No one ever speaks of Faction One since the feud between people and the king. Nara is from Faction Two. She...
    SlenderMan_
    4 years ago
    Thanks Beth!!<3
  • Beth...
    5 years agoReply
    love.love.love.love.love.
    DESCRIPTION=AMAZING
    CHARACTERS=PORTRAYED BRILLIANTLY
    VOCABULARY=AMAZING
    My Heart Will Melt
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    Sarah has been desperate to see Joe for a long time now. Now that she is at a party where he will be, she has the perfect opportunity to rekindle the flame between them. But something happens, beforehand....
    SlenderMan_
    5 years ago
    Thank you!!!!!:)<3
  • Beth...
    5 years agoReply
    love this! love the line 'lit by God's docile hand'... it's brilliant, well written, great vocabulary... Excellent job!
    Star Gazing
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    My old english teacher has asked me to write and recite a poem for the poetry evening on thursday. The theme of the evening is Stars. What do you think?
    WriterMan
    5 years ago
    Thank you, I'm glad you liked it. I enjoy writing poetry other people appreciate. If you have time, It would be greatif I could have your feedback on my movella,
    NightmaresAlexis Walters, a teenage girl is having trouble, when it comes to sleeping. But what's causing it?
    If you don't want to read it then I understand, but I'd at least like your view on the trailor I just made for it. Thank you. x
  • Beth...
    5 years agoReply
    Letter 2: love the line 'life is dark and i am damned.' this chapter is so emotional, so truthful... so raw. But nobody's doomed Lia, especially you. You have the strength to pull yourself out of this 'dark hole'... I know you can
    Letters Of The Silent Sufferer
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    These are my letters... My troubles... I never speak of my troubles but I suffer severely... So I address these letters to you, My World.
    Beth...
    5 years ago
    no you're not doomed, you're only 13 Lia, you're not doomed, your life is just getting started!
  • Beth...
    5 years agoReply
    Love love love it. so emotional... so gripping. love the part about being a black hole, it's brilliant! Keep writing Lia!
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    These are my letters... My troubles... I never speak of my troubles but I suffer severely... So I address these letters to you, My World.
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