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  • Ben H&le
    5 years agoReply
    a good little story that is visually compelling, need more though :)
    check my short story out if you can be bothered
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    A new creature is brought on to Earth, named a Shikami. A girl brought back to life to destroy 108 Shikami like herself as ordered by a mysterious Nun to gain access to Heaven. Along the way she discovers...
  • Ben H&le
    5 years agoReply
    Very good, the language really pulls you in :)
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    'I stood there, unable to move, mesmerised by her exquisite beauty.' A short horror story I wrote a while ago. It is my first Movella in this genre so please leave feedback! :) PS: The character describing...
    BlueBooks
    5 years ago
    Thanks you! :))))
  • Ben H&le
    5 years agoReply
    wow this is good, great ending, wish mine was half as well written :)
    Until death do us part
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    A short story that I've been working on for this competition. I really hope you like it! 'I have been on this earth for only a mere moment, but soon I shall be gone for an eternity. But, even when...
    Beth...
    5 years ago
    thank you, i'm glad you liked it! please hit the like button! i'm sure yours is amazing! I'll check it out now :) x
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