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Writer, reader, dreamer, adventurer in the great wide somewhere.

  • BelleBeauty
    3 years agoReply
    Brilliant! Very original and extremely well-written, with a wide vocabulary. Are you writing more?

    A wild adventure: The trivial pursuit of company
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    Miller has been wandering alone for a long time. Maybe his days of wandering alone are finally over.
  • BelleBeauty
    3 years agoReply
    Nice! It's an intriguing idea you have here, and it's well-written so far. Good stuff! :)

    If you get a minute, could you look at my entry 'Right Place Right Time'? Thank you :)
    The curse of Resurrection
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    Set in 1840. Will with the help of witch Theo decide to resurrect Iris Cadance, a young woman with mysterious powers and a dangerous past. Soon they will realise the price of bringing back the dead...
    A Writer1
    3 years ago
    Thank you :) I will check out your entry.
  • BelleBeauty
    3 years agoReply
    I'd be so grateful for a review of this, my longest story ever!

    Thank you! :)

    Right Place Right Time"Nat? Do you really think I'm from the 21st century, or do you just think I'm mad?" She exhaled deeply, let my hand go. I looked up nervously. "I...
    The Review Store |CLOSED|
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    The Review Store! A no-charge (how could I charge?) place to get your Constructive Criticism, Gushing Reviews and a Hater Review. Seriously, I'm very flexible. And yes, that was a joke.
    Sanguine
    3 years ago
    I'll do it after school
    BelleBeauty
    3 years ago
    Thanks :)
    Sanguine
    3 years ago
    Reviewed, and thank you for letting me publish it on the Movella
  • BelleBeauty
    3 years agoReply
    Me again :) I absolutely love the changes you made: the description was wonderful, and you do a really great job of painting a picture for your reader. Those characters felt real, and that only made the ending all the more tragic.

    Keep right on going, you're doing great.
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    “If I had but five minutes to change the world I would start by altering every heartbeat” 5 minutes past 5 on the 5th of May. That's when each of the plane crashes were. 1943. 1975. 2014. 2067. 2150....
  • BelleBeauty
    3 years agoReply
    Whoa :0 This is brilliant! Suspenseful, intriguing and with a wide vocabulary. Please keep going!

    Also, if you get a minute I'd be really grateful for some honest feedback on my own entry 'Right Place Right Time'.

    Thank you!
    Dying to Live
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    [The Seventh Miss Hatfield Competition] The man moved closer, so that his lips were at her ear as he whispered the last words of her short little life. “Then die.” Cover done by the incredible River_Summers!
    Prodigy
    3 years ago
    Why thank you!! Next time I get a chance, certainly :)
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