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  • Sorceror's Gate
    Sorceror's Gate
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  • The Streets
    The Streets
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  • Beccy
    5 years agoReply
    I love this. I would only ask could you maybe space it out a bit? Just 'cos that way the speech would be easier to follow?
    I like the introduction about dragons, and in the second chapter I already like the prince - and his sympathy towards living things. I'll definitely be reading more :-)
    The Saga: New Found Freedom
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    Freya is an ordinary farmer girl, but when her Uncle kills a dragon in his land. She runs away, but she meets Prince Arthur of Camelot and Merlin. She realizes her powers, and uses them to good use. But...
    Erica Bluewater
    5 years ago
    i'll see what i can do, thanks :D
  • Beccy
    5 years agoReply
    I love this. Just one or two little things - what do you mean by excentric? Are the village people eccentric? Or ecstatic? Just thought I'd ask! And finally the bit about oblivion, I got a bit confused, I love how you wrote about the darkness entering the fray I just wasn't sure that the celebration was an oblivion?
    The dragon itself is fantastic, I imagine him as a great brute - so powerful he can send earthquakes, and yet he can pick up a baby so gently with his talons...I'm looking forward to reading more.
    Heirs of Emilai
    Heirs of Emilai
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    After a dragon destroys their village, twins Whim and Liv are seperated. Whim is taken to the dragon's castle, where she is meant to spend the rest of her days. Meanwhile, Liv is living with her grandmother,...
  • Beccy
    5 years agoReply
    I enjoyed this a lot, it kind of reminded my of Katherine Roberts writing. Brilliantly described, I especially liked the bit about it 'brushing the dignity of her shoulder and replacing it with a heavy shame'. Can't wait to read more :-)
    The Element Connection
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    For the first time, the elements (water, fire, magic, and knowledge) are going to work together. The four leaders are going to choose a young, brave soul from each of the kingdoms, combining their unique...
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