FemaleMember since 13 Apr 12Age 26Last online 5 years ago

Love writing poems which could range right from a feeling that im going through..or any relevant topic that crosses my mind.. It is through writing that im able to best express myself.. I would love it if you all give in your comments.. and I would gladly accept criticism, as i'm here to learn and gain more insight into the different ways of writing, so that i could ameliorate my future work.. :) thanks guys.. take care.. :)

  • beborao
    6 years agoReply
    its wonderful.. :) love the expression.. hey could you please go through some of my movellas too.. i would be grateful if a good poet like you comments on my poetry.. Criticism is most welcome.. :) thanks..!!
    The Finality of being a Man... that I am.
    The Finality of...
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    Seeker
    6 years ago
    Dear friend... Thanks for your appreciation... much value it. I have written a few thoughts (cannot call them criticism as I a still a novice) and hope that you would find them worthy of consideration.

    Regards.
  • beborao
    6 years agoReply
    woooow.. fantastic.. loved the rhyme scheme.. i wonder why nobody has commented on it yet.. liked the fact that you put forth the feelings in a systematic manner.. Gr9 work.. :) hey if time permits, do check some of my movellas.. coz i am into writing poems too.. :)
    What Began As A Smile
    What Began As A...
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    A little poem about my ex. Written on 8/04/11
  • beborao
    6 years agoReply
    nice work.. :) if time permits do go through my movellas too.. would be grateful.. thanks.. :)
    An Ode to Life
    An Ode to Life
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    This piece is like a smolder of hope that I read everytime to keep myself burning...
    Seeker
    6 years ago
    Dear friend... Thanks for your appreciation... much value it.

    I have written a few thoughts (cannot call them criticism as I a still a novice) and hope that you would find them worthy of consideration.

    Regards.
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