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Surrounded as I am mainly by fields and grass and grazing cows, I have learn to draw inspiration from almost anything, and turn it into a tale. I am fascinated by everyhing from Sports, to Ancient History, and nothing is safe from my over-enthusiastic mind

  • B.Watkins
    3 years agoReply
    Great idea with the nursery rhymes-adds a very chilling aspect to the murders and is something I can see fitting in with Moriarty's character, well done!
    Rhyming Murder
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    For the fanfiction competition. Contains spoilers for series 3
  • B.Watkins
    3 years agoReply
    Great work-I'd be very interested to see what happens if Sherlock doesn't regain his memories, especially if he worked on a case without knowing what he has done in the past-very good stuff!
    Amnesia at 221B
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    When a blow to the back of the head wipes Sherlock's memory, his friends have to do whatever they can to get him to remember who he is. But will they ever convince the detective of his real identity?
  • B.Watkins
    5 years agoReply
    I just have this image of a super badass Dementor walking trhough London with a Tophat- and its awesome. Really like the imagery and the way you lead the reader through your thoughts. Stringing us all along very nicely. Good luck in the competition! I definitely think you should make this a full length thing!
    City of Souls
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    Can a city possibly have a negative, sinister legacy? London used to be a heartfelt city, until one person entered the streets of London, and turned everything to ice with the bitter chill of his soul....
    SlenderMan_
    5 years ago
    Wow, thank you! Yeah, I have a thing for Dementors and that was the image I had in my head - I am glad we share it! Thank you, I hope I place :D I plan to do a prequel & a sequel after the comp!
  • B.Watkins
    5 years agoReply
    Once again, I feel immediately plunged in and then placed on a preicpice. I like the whole idea, like many have said, time travel is always fun to change with, and its nice to see you havent gone crazy with the idea and gone back in time to save the dinosaurs (although that would be a mighty interesting part three) I like the idea and, although talking to a pocket watch isnt the most interesting of dialogues, I'm very much looking forward to the finale
    Shades of Grey
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    (This is nothing to do with the blasphemy that is E L James!) Can Gabriel Grey solve his own murder before it's too late? A story that explores time travel and its effects, this is a mystery with a...
    Timothy Turpin
    5 years ago
    I would agree that the pocket watch/Gabriel monologue isn't desperately interesting. I shall have to remedy that in a rewrite.

    Ha, I should write about the dinosaurs in that way... It's always fun to save the dinosaurs. But then there's the problem with paradoxes.
  • B.Watkins
    5 years agoReply
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    10 whole chapters of this! I feel like I'm about to gorge myself on a feast of words and storylines. Bravo, my good man. Another book I will now have to read completely and multiple times. Keep up the good work.
    The Wizard And His Dragon (Part 1)
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    The second Dragon Wars are drawing near; the conclusion to a timeless fued is reaching out to those who have no part in it, but soon will become the heart of it.
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